Please read the two articles (links below) and respond to the prompt.
“Both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put
them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing.”
http://www.digitaljournal.com/article/86931
http://blog.taragana.com/e/2010/05/25/technology-blamed-for-creating-an-epidemic-of-loneliness-131567/
There are several different tools where technology is being used to induce interaction between people. and alleviate them from states of loneliness. Today, more and more people are gaining access to such technological tools and using them to alleviate themselves from states of loneliness. I disagree with the prompt. The development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity have put them have brought us together like never before.
ReplyDeleteSome people argue that social networking sites such as Facebook isolate us from each other. They claim that because these sites allow us to so easily communicate remotely with each other, we never feel the need to experience face to face contact with people who we would otherwise interact with daily. They claim that our dependence on computers stifles our interpersonal skills to a point where we lose the ability to interact directly with people. Some people also claim that in modern civilization, the time we spend on computers is time that we should be spending interacting directly with people.
Although social networking sites gives us the option to remotely interact with people, it does not hamper our ability to make friends. In fact social networks bring people closer together because it allows us to tighten bonds between friends that we would have already made in the real world. Facebook for instance is generally not used to make new friends but to catch up on friends that we already have. It allows us to be in contact with these friends for longer periods of time and it even helps us to plan dates to meet our friends in person. Social networking sites also allow us to keep track of people that we would have lost contact with such as childhood or high school acquaintances. These sites are substitutes for natural, physical communication, but they supplement real world experiences.
Furthermore, technology does not increase loneliness but on the contrary it reduces it. In order to find a job, to study or to marry, people often move far away from their family and friends. These people essentially move from an environment of companionship to that of loneliness. Without technological tools these people would remain in such a state. However, because of technology, we are able to maintain bonds despite of physical separations. People who use video chat for example get the ability to communicate with any person in the world, as long as both parties have adequate internet access. Video chat like Skype is used every day to maintain relationships over long distances.
In conclusion, it can be seen that in modern civilization, technological tools can be used to abridge periods of isolation and loneliness. Computers, the internet, social networking sites and video chatting are a few tools we use for this. Today we do not spend more time in isolation. We spend more time in communication with other people during periods where, without technological tools, we would have been alone.
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There can be no doubt that advances in technology have allowed us to reach beyond our borders to other nations and other peoples to create more connections and lines of communications. Many people feel as if these innovations have created a stronger bond between people and have given rise to an increase in relationships. However, accompanying these advances is a sense of great loneliness being shared by more and more people that live in these technologically sophisticated areas. Unfortunately, if we do not choose to put face to face human connections to the forefront, this loneliness will continue to grow steadily. In this essay, I will argue that increased use of such networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter and cell phones and smart phones are creating impersonal relationships and a lack of social skills.
ReplyDeleteThough many people feel as though Facebook and Twitter are excellent ways to connect people quickly and easily, they are not considering the entire effects of these websites. Although they do allow people the ease of “connecting within seconds, they take away the personal connection. A lack of face time can rapidly turn in to a sense of loneliness. People on the internet can easily say, “we need to get together again soon!” and although this may have been said with good intentions, a lack of follow through can lead to hurt feelings, less trust, and misconceptions. Sites such as twitter can draw people in to constantly update their actions and emotions leading to more time spent on a computer and less intimate responses than desired. Loneliness can also arise from viewing what friends tweet or post. For someone to see a friend attending an event that he was not invited to can lead to loneliness. Although these are just some examples of the way advances in the internet have added to loneliness, it is not limited to the web.
Cell phones and smart phones are also adding to the overwhelming feeling of be alone. Though many people feel that cell phones are more beneficial than harmful to society, people are much more likely to play games, text, or add virtual applications than call someone or pay attention to the person whom they are with. When people text, they often use abbreviations or say things differently than they would in person, just to fit the 180 word maximum. This can often make interpersonal skills weak, because someone is unable to sufficiently say what they mean. Also, it is not just the person using the technology who may feel lonely. We have all heard the saying, “No texting at the dinner table”, but this doesn’t fully portray the disconnect between most parents and their children in the technology age. Many parents are not fully aware of what is happening in their teenager’s life because he would rather text than talk. Nobody likes to be ignored or be cast to the side for the sounds of an incoming text message, tweet, i.m., or call.
This so called “lonely society” is being initiated by advances in technology. Though these advances also have good uses; helping people find their way home, learn more, and gather information, they also do much harm. People are having more and more difficulty connecting and understanding each other without using text. Words and ideas are not being fully conveyed because the tone of our voices can’t be heard or our subtle head nod or raised eyebrows can’t be seen. These emotional reactions are often left out of the question and as a result, end up fostering loneliness. We spend so much time reading a post then moving on to the next and then on to the after that, and sometimes after we have finished scanning pages of material we are left with nothing but what we have gathered. There is no reaction and no response, verbally or physically, and as a society, if we continue to ignore one another on the streets or only identify each other with our applications on our IPhone, we will be heading in to dangerous territory, with loneliness as a global plague, affecting everyone.
Many hold the view that advances in technology will inevitably isolate individuals from one another. However, this view point ignores the vast capabilities for communication that have been created through technology. Thus, to hold negative opinions on the technological advancements in modern society is to promote restrictions on communication. As a result, technology should be allowed to continue to flourish so that methods of communication will continue to improve.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lingering opinion that technology is so entrancing that it is very capable of making individuals completely absorbed in its wonders to the point where they never want to leave their house. This statement is to the contrary, technology actually makes individuals more willing to explore the outside world. With its ability to portray detailed and accurate depictions what life is like on various parts of not only the country, but the planet (through pictures, videos, blogs, etc.) people become increasingly aware of the beauty and excitement of different parts of the world. As a result, they become more eager to visit these areas to get a first-hand view.
Many argue that technology has become so increasingly advanced that one can essentially get all their needs addressed without requiring significant human contact. Those who hold this view ignore the simple fact that everyone is inherently human and share inherently human qualities. As humans, we long to share our opinions and discuss our feelings on certain issues—it is only natural. Thus, regardless of how much we get from technology, there will still be a need to share/discuss an experience or a view point with others. Hence the reason people watch sports games together or discuss the news during their free time at work.
Taking note of the exponential rise of technology, many fear that there will be many people who cannot “keep up” with all of technology’s advances and will inevitably be “left behind” in a lonely state while the rest of the world is coping with the changes. This argument is, on the surface, an attack at technology but really it is an attack on the critics views themselves. They argue that with less technology there will be more interaction and less loneliness. So according to this logic, the people who are “left behind” will have less technology in their lives and will be able to be more interactive with the outside world. Advances in technology don’t inhibit the baseline interaction that would occur sans technology, but rather it enhances it.
When one compares how communication worked one hundred years ago versus how it works today, the differences are astounding. A person in America would never dream of being able to communicate with someone in China via telephone. That same person would also be bemused at the fact that he/she could actually see the person who they are communicating with. It is clear communication is thriving as a result of technological advances. Thus, technology should continue its rapid development to promote more improved methods to human interaction.
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@ Brenna
ReplyDeleteI thought your argument was well stated and you brought up some very interesting points. For example, I liked what you said about the disconnect that is created when you rely to much on technology as opposed to face-to-face interaction. That in itself is a very real concern.
However, by bringing up networking sites like facebook and twitter I would argue that the several points you brought up would not even occur if those networking sites did not exist. IE one would not "attempt to hang out" with the other person if not for facebook or find out about the party (and who knows maybe they end up going because they found out via facebook and have a great time). So in a way these sites make us more globally aware and better able to communicate and find out about things.
Experts claim that the advancement of high technology has resulted in a detrimental loss of physical human interaction. They even go so far as to say these developing technologies are causing isolation to the point of death. With newly created networks and ever-advancing electronics, such as face book, twitter, ichat, ipods, and kindles, critics fear an alienation that will not only eventually lead to weak social skills, but will end contact altogether. However, it is important to consider that perhaps part of man’s existence is to carry onward progress, and innovation. Both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which communication is ever increasing.
ReplyDeleteThe invention of face book has been deemed by some critics a network that hinders our ability to meet people and create authentic relationships. Although some individuals have used the network as a space to “friend” strangers, they have also employed the site as a way to maintain previously established relationships. For example, most people’s “friend” list is composed of high school peers, college associates, and close relatives. Rather than waiting until a moment to make a phone call to someone out of proximity, face book users can easily log on and hold a virtually conversation. Perchance, people are able to touch base with family and friends they lost contact with all because of an innovation and search engine that allows for more convenience and less time expense.
In addition, modernized electronics have only worked to expand the realm of face-to-face interactions. Before the use of webcams connected through visual networks such as Oovoo or the Mac’s ichat, people were limited to conversation through messaging or phone voice. Now, those with computer cameras have the option of maintaining valuable face-time from their separate living rooms. With these examples in mind, it is difficult to understand the fear of isolation that experts say will ultimately result from the development of technological tools. If anything, the new devices have motivated people to connect, reconnect, and enhance personal relationships.
In conclusion, it cannot be more apparent that both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilization in which isolation is no where near ever increasing. In truth, these advancements have actually opened doors of communication that may have failed to exist otherwise. In this day of age, people are busy and have less time to travel on appearance. With the help of social networks and new electronic devices, they have a way to preserve relationships that makes them feel as real as ever.
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In 2010, technology is ever increasing and it has remained an essential component of all forms of communication. It has been argued that the development of technological tools and their uses, in relationship to humanity, have created a sense of loneliness within society. However, technology may weaken interpersonal skills but, at the same time, it makes a social network more accessible. Thus, it cannot be completely justified to say that technology has created loneliness. In order to completely understand technology and its impact on society, we must find a balance between interpersonal contact and accessibility of societal interaction.
ReplyDeleteInterpersonal contact remains paramount to all human communication and ultimately creates a stronger social network. Some may argue that technology has made social interaction more successful; however, communication should also be anchored by interpersonal contact. With the increasing forms of communicational technology people may fail to recognize the power of physical human contact. For instance, many find it more comfortable to have a conversation via text message rather than face to face in certain situations. There is a certain amount of discretion that someone must determine, and often times, it can be hard to decipher the true intent of a text message because words can be interpreted differently based on the reader. If the text message was sent by individuals who have established an interpersonal relationship first, the content may be easier to decipher. There remains a social disconnect that perhaps can be linked to loneliness. If forms of technology are the only means of communication, then one may begin to have increasing loneliness. In order to completely understand and become more effective, technology should be used to supplement a pre-existing interpersonal contact.
Some may suggest that communication without technology is the only effective way of communication. However, supplementing technology into social interaction creates different levels of human contact that can sometimes act as a cure for loneliness. There are various levels of human contact in which the highest level of interaction is interpersonal or face to face, while the lower levels may be text message, instant messaging, email, etc. For example, someone may be lonely and begin to use an online dating chat room, later have phone conversations and ultimately meet in person, face to face. This is a case of technology supplementing and strengthening interpersonal connections. The use of technology has the capability to prepare strangers to meet each other at the highest level; in person.
It is clear to see that communicational technology has its pros and cons. If one relies completely on technology to host all forms of communication, it may be less effective and they may become lonely. If technology is implemented with the strength of interpersonal human contact, it creates a dynamic field of human interaction and begins to transcend communication.
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@ Deon, You do a good job of directing your essay. You state your opinion well. I agree that technology has increased availability of social contact. However, maybe it has decreased the quality of social contact? Perhaps there are different levels of communication, some stronger than others based on the amount room for misinterpretation. So I begin to question how effective a Facebook chat is, in comparison to a face to face encounter. Technology may, in fact, mask the reality of something like loneliness.
ReplyDeleteToday many people would argue that the development of new technologies and the implementation of those new tools create a world in which loneliness is an ever-increasing phenomenon. It is true that the these new tools such as Facebook and texting do in fact create a world in which loneliness is more prominent, but they do not necessarily cut people off from the world. The creation of new lines of communication and interaction have accelerated the means with which individuals can interact with each other, while at the same time altering the nature of those interactions. Relationships and friendships are no longer measure solely on the time by which people physically spend around each other and speak with one another about their lives.
ReplyDeleteThe usage of telephones and communication has been completely altered by the invention and mass usage of texting. Although useful in certain situations, the nature of conversations using phones is no longer the same as it was before the invention of texting. When conversing, humans use a number of tools including intonation and semantics to convey certain messages with their words. But with the arrival of texting, the ability to include such tools as sarcasm and intonation are made obsolete as the technology eliminates the ability to do so.
Facebook is another tool that has revolutionized the way in which individuals meet other people and begin relationships. The act of declaring someone a “friend” on Facebook has completely changed the concept, as it is applicable to real life situation. While this concept may seem very straightforward in the sense that “friends” on Facebook do not equate with friends in the real world, some individuals fail to see the misconnection. While the technology has revolutionized the definition of friendships and relationships, Facebook has also changes the way by which people do interact with their friends. Now individuals can see what their friends have been doing via their photos on Facebook instead of sitting down with them and talking about such events.
The development of technology that revolutionizes our world and the way in which we communicate with each other will continue to evolve as we proceed into the future. While it is true that the inventions of such tool as Facebook and texting have created a world in which loneliness is much more predominate, there is still hope. The arrival of Skype is an example in which technology has the ability to reverse the negative effects that texting and Facebook have had on the way in which individuals communicate with each other in the future.
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@ Wuroh
ReplyDeleteI thought you had a very clear and concise argument. The application of technology to the modern would will only further speed up the rate with which people can acquire new information. Today it is possible to look something up on the internet in less than a minute where as fifty years ago it could take hours to accomplish the same task in the library.
The word technology encompasses an amalgamation of ideas and concepts. These ideas and concepts are continuously growing, and in retrospect becoming a major part of everyday human life in many countries. Whether it is “poking” someone on Facebook, “tweeting” a friend on Twitter, or just becoming friends with someone half way across the world on MySpace; social networking sites have had an impacting technological influence in the lives of people all over the world. However, what many users of these popular social networking sites have failed to realize, is that their constant and “addicting” use to accessing these websites has begun to lead to a decrease in social skills and healthy relationships. Until we understand that these networking sites must be used in moderation, we will continue on a path towards personal isolation and loneliness. What is rather more concerning is that if parents or guardians do not monitor their children’s use of sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace, Etc they will essentially have children who will not learn the importance of interpersonal communication. Furthermore, allowing them to not develop the social skills necessary to be successful in their adult life.
ReplyDeleteThe use of social networking sites by children (under the age of 18) has become a major problem in many places. Every so often, one cannot help but notice the story on the 10PM news about some kids bullying a schoolmate on Facebook, or starting a fan page which rather than promotes someone or something, serves as a “hate page,” to belittle them. We must also not disregard the constant issues that have arose with children coming in contact with strangers, who desire to meet youth on these sites while pretending to be some belied person. In accompany, are also cases where in many situations, girls under the age of 18 have posted inappropriate pictures which have essentially caused catholic controversy. If issues such as these are not addressed by parents or guardians, or rather prevented, then it will only become a much larger problem. And lead to children misunderstanding what proper communication and relationships should exemplify.
In conclusion, the ever increasing popularity of social networking sites has created a major problem in today’s society. Whether it be the chagrin that arises as a result of a parent finding out their child posted inappropriate pictures, or the callow site users coming in contact with dangerous people; these sites are creating major problems for the youth of our world. A new vernacular has begun to develop that may be teaching children it is OK to communicate with words that have no place in the English language. Although there may be no immediate or correct solution to this problem, it must in some way be resolved. Because if it is not resolved soon, we might one day find ourselves saying, OMG what has happen?
As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
On one hand, Twitter is a very useful tool that can be used to keep friends and followers updated on user’s lives; the networking site is also a social deterrent for many users because it distracts them from what is happening. Often when tweeters experience a significant event their first reaction is to document the situation by updating their web tool, instead of being completely invested in the moment. The time spent texting the details of the occurrence, draws their attention away from the event happening, thus desensitizing us.
In short, there is a consensus among experts that we have a biological need for human contact. To help us satisfy that need we must remember that just like any other aspect of life, the use of technology must be done in moderation. No matter how far technology advances an emoticon will never supplant an encouraging smile from your best friend, or a warm hug from a loved one. As technology becomes increasingly innovative and plays a more prominent role in our lives, we must be careful not to let it replace physical relationships.
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As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
On one hand, Twitter is a very useful tool that can be used to keep friends and followers updated on user’s lives; the networking site is also a social deterrent for many users because it distracts them from what is happening. Often when tweeters experience a significant event their first reaction is to document the situation by updating their web tool, instead of being completely invested in the moment. The time spent texting the details of the occurrence, draws their attention away from the event happening, thus desensitizing us.
In short, there is a consensus among experts that we have a biological need for human contact. To help us satisfy that need we must remember that just like any other aspect of life, the use of technology must be done in moderation. No matter how far technology advances an emoticon will never supplant an encouraging smile from your best friend, or a warm hug from a loved one. As technology becomes increasingly innovative and plays a more prominent role in our lives, we must be careful not to let it replace physical relationships.
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The word technology encompasses an amalgamation of ideas and concepts. These ideas and concepts are continuously growing, and in retrospect becoming a major part of everyday human life in many countries. Whether it is “poking” someone on Facebook, “tweeting” a friend on Twitter, or just becoming friends with someone half way across the world on MySpace; social networking sites have had an impacting technological influence in the lives of people all over the world. However, what many users of these popular social networking sites have failed to realize, is that their constant and “addicting” use to accessing these websites has begun to lead to a decrease in social skills and healthy relationships. Until we understand that these networking sites must be used in moderation, we will continue on a path towards personal isolation and loneliness. What is rather more concerning is that if parents or guardians do not monitor their children’s use of sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace, Etc they will essentially have children who will not learn the importance of interpersonal communication. Furthermore, allowing them to not develop the social skills necessary to be successful in their adult life.
ReplyDeleteThe use of social networking sites by children (under the age of 18) has become a major problem in many places. Every so often, one cannot help but notice the story on the 10PM news about some kids bullying a schoolmate on Facebook, or starting a fan page which rather than promotes someone or something, serves as a “hate page,” to belittle them. We must also not disregard the constant issues that have arose with children coming in contact with strangers, who desire to meet youth on these sites while pretending to be some belied person. In accompany, are also cases where in many situations, girls under the age of 18 have posted inappropriate pictures which have essentially caused catholic controversy. If issues such as these are not addressed by parents or guardians, or rather prevented, then it will only become a much larger problem. And lead to children misunderstanding what proper communication and relationships should exemplify.
In conclusion, the ever increasing popularity of social networking sites has created a major problem in today’s society. Whether it be the chagrin that arises as a result of a parent finding out their child posted inappropriate pictures, or the callow site users coming in contact with dangerous people; these sites are creating major problems for the youth of our world. A new vernacular has begun to develop that may be teaching children it is OK to communicate with words that have no place in the English language. Although there may be no immediate or correct solution to this problem, it must in some way be resolved. Because if it is not resolved soon, we might one day find ourselves saying, OMG what has happen?
As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
On one hand, Twitter is a very useful tool that can be used to keep friends and followers updated on user’s lives; the networking site is also a social deterrent for many users because it distracts them from what is happening. Often when tweeters experience a significant event their first reaction is to document the situation by updating their web tool, instead of being completely invested in the moment. The time spent texting the details of the occurrence, draws their attention away from the event happening, thus desensitizing us.
In short, there is a consensus among experts that we have a biological need for human contact. To help us satisfy that need we must remember that just like any other aspect of life, the use of technology must be done in moderation. No matter how far technology advances an emoticon will never supplant an encouraging smile from your best friend, or a warm hug from a loved one. As technology becomes increasingly innovative and plays a more prominent role in our lives, we must be careful not to let it replace physical relationships.
Word Count: 508
The word technology encompasses an amalgamation of ideas and concepts. These ideas and concepts are continuously growing, and in retrospect becoming a major part of everyday human life in many countries. Whether it is “poking” someone on Facebook, “tweeting” a friend on Twitter, or just becoming friends with someone half way across the world on MySpace; social networking sites have had an impacting technological influence in the lives of people all over the world. However, what many users of these popular social networking sites have failed to realize, is that their constant and “addicting” use to accessing these websites has begun to lead to a decrease in social skills and healthy relationships. Until we understand that these networking sites must be used in moderation, we will continue on a path towards personal isolation and loneliness. What is rather more concerning is that if parents or guardians do not monitor their children’s use of sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace, Etc they will essentially have children who will not learn the importance of interpersonal communication. Furthermore, allowing them to not develop the social skills necessary to be successful in their adult life.
ReplyDeleteThe use of social networking sites by children (under the age of 18) has become a major problem in many places. Every so often, one cannot help but notice the story on the 10PM news about some kids bullying a schoolmate on Facebook, or starting a fan page which rather than promotes someone or something, serves as a “hate page,” to belittle them. We must also not disregard the constant issues that have arose with children coming in contact with strangers, who desire to meet youth on these sites while pretending to be some belied person. In accompany, are also cases where in many situations, girls under the age of 18 have posted inappropriate pictures which have essentially caused catholic controversy. If issues such as these are not addressed by parents or guardians, or rather prevented, then it will only become a much larger problem. And lead to children misunderstanding what proper communication and relationships should exemplify.
In conclusion, the ever increasing popularity of social networking sites has created a major problem in today’s society. Whether it be the chagrin that arises as a result of a parent finding out their child posted inappropriate pictures, or the callow site users coming in contact with dangerous people; these sites are creating major problems for the youth of our world. A new vernacular has begun to develop that may be teaching children it is OK to communicate with words that have no place in the English language. Although there may be no immediate or correct solution to this problem, it must in some way be resolved. Because if it is not resolved soon, we might one day find ourselves saying, OMG what has happen?
The word technology encompasses an amalgamation of ideas and concepts. These ideas and concepts are continuously growing, and in retrospect becoming a major part of everyday human life in many countries. Whether it is “poking” someone on Facebook, “tweeting” a friend on Twitter, or just becoming friends with someone half way across the world on MySpace; social networking sites have had an impacting technological influence in the lives of people all over the world. However, what many users of these popular social networking sites have failed to realize, is that their constant and “addicting” use to accessing these websites has begun to lead to a decrease in social skills and healthy relationships. Until we understand that these networking sites must be used in moderation, we will continue on a path towards personal isolation and loneliness. What is rather more concerning is that if parents or guardians do not monitor their children’s use of sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace, Etc they will essentially have children who will not learn the importance of interpersonal communication. Furthermore, allowing them to not develop the social skills necessary to be successful in their adult life.
ReplyDeleteThe use of social networking sites by children (under the age of 18) has become a major problem in many places. Every so often, one cannot help but notice the story on the 10PM news about some kids bullying a schoolmate on Facebook, or starting a fan page which rather than promotes someone or something, serves as a “hate page,” to belittle them. We must also not disregard the constant issues that have arose with children coming in contact with strangers, who desire to meet youth on these sites while pretending to be some belied person. In accompany, are also cases where in many situations, girls under the age of 18 have posted inappropriate pictures which have essentially caused catholic controversy. If issues such as these are not addressed by parents or guardians, or rather prevented, then it will only become a much larger problem. And lead to children misunderstanding what proper communication and relationships should exemplify.
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ReplyDeleteAs technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
On one hand, Twitter is a very useful tool that can be used to keep friends and followers updated on user’s lives; the networking site is also a social deterrent for many users because it distracts them from what is happening. Often when tweeters experience a significant event their first reaction is to document the situation by updating their web tool, instead of being completely invested in the moment. The time spent texting the details of the occurrence, draws their attention away from the event happening, thus desensitizing us.
In short, there is a consensus among experts that we have a biological need for human contact. To help us satisfy that need we must remember that just like any other aspect of life, the use of technology must be done in moderation. No matter how far technology advances an emoticon will never supplant an encouraging smile from your best friend, or a warm hug from a loved one. As technology becomes increasingly innovative and plays a more prominent role in our lives, we must be careful not to let it replace physical relationships.
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As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
On one hand, Twitter is a very useful tool that can be used to keep friends and followers updated on user’s lives; the networking site is also a social deterrent for many users because it distracts them from what is happening. Often when tweeters experience a significant event their first reaction is to document the situation by updating their web tool, instead of being completely invested in the moment. The time spent texting the details of the occurrence, draws their attention away from the event happening, thus desensitizing us.
In short, there is a consensus among experts that we have a biological need for human contact. To help us satisfy that need we must remember that just like any other aspect of life, the use of technology must be done in moderation. No matter how far technology advances an emoticon will never supplant an encouraging smile from your best friend, or a warm hug from a loved one. As technology becomes increasingly innovative and plays a more prominent role in our lives, we must be careful not to let it replace physical relationships.
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As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
The advancement in technology has created an amalgamation of emotion surrounding how beneficial it truly is. Some argue that technology has generated an era of loneness that is increasing along with technological advancements. Individuals today can do so much in one day without leaving the room. This includes sending emails, talking/texting friends, watching television, ordering basic essential online, etc. However, this argument fails to recognize how much more independent and self reliant people have become. In fact technology has also helped the development of relationships that may not have occurred otherwise. If we continue to look at technological tools in a negative light we will lose the positive aspects to social networking. In the following essay I will argue that civilization is not creating loneliness but in some instances increasing social networking and independence.
ReplyDeleteWith the construction of online bill paying, online shopping, the ability to work from home in numerous professions, cell phones, internet, etc. it is inevitably that some people will attempt to seclude themselves from the outside world. But humankind is made up for various different personalities. From the soft-spoken to the outspoken, from the diffident to the talkative, from the hermits to the friendly, every person is different. With that in mind it would be very difficult to take someone out of their character and force them into a lonely atmosphere. Many lonely people choose to be alone. Technology has given us numerous opportunities to network with others. This includes facebook, myspace, webcams, dating sites, video games, email, cell phones, etc. All these things are popular but they require interaction with others and many times interaction with others you would not meet otherwise.
The development of technology has been harmful to some individuals. It has taken away their sense of inclusion and placed them in a world of convoluted machinery. Not everyone is computer legit or can figure out the mechanics of a cell phone. Yet the advancement of technology helps people to reduce their dependence on the simpler things and learn to rely on themselves to solve hard, complex problems. A single individual can buy a cell phone but they must learn how to use the applications. A person can register for a facebook account but they must learn to maneuver through the site. Technology is not only advancing civilization but teaching people problem solving techniques, more reliable communication, and how to be independent.
In closing, while technology can create some seclusion it can also bring about better social networking and self reliance. As a nation we need to delineate between placing ourselves in shell versus putting ourselves out there to better our own advancement in society. How we interact is a choice and technology or not the choice is ours.
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The advancement in technology has created an amalgamation of emotion surrounding how beneficial it truly is. Some argue that technology has generated an era of loneness that is increasing along with technological advancements. Individuals today can do so much in one day without leaving the room. This includes sending emails, talking/texting friends, watching television, ordering basic essential online, etc. However, this argument fails to recognize how much more independent and self reliant people have become. In fact technology has also helped the development of relationships that may not have occurred otherwise. If we continue to look at technological tools in a negative light we will lose the positive aspects to social networking. In the following essay I will argue that civilization is not creating loneliness but in some instances increasing social networking and independence.
ReplyDeleteWith the construction of online bill paying, online shopping, the ability to work from home in numerous professions, cell phones, internet, etc. it is inevitably that some people will attempt to seclude themselves from the outside world. But humankind is made up for various different personalities. From the soft-spoken to the outspoken, from the diffident to the talkative, from the hermits to the friendly, every person is different. With that in mind it would be very difficult to take someone out of their character and force them into a lonely atmosphere. Many lonely people choose to be alone. Technology has given us numerous opportunities to network with others. This includes facebook, myspace, webcams, dating sites, video games, email, cell phones, etc. All these things are popular but they require interaction with others and many times interaction with others you would not meet otherwise.
The development of technology has been harmful to some individuals. It has taken away their sense of inclusion and placed them in a world of convoluted machinery. Not everyone is computer legit or can figure out the mechanics of a cell phone. Yet the advancement of technology helps people to reduce their dependence on the simpler things and learn to rely on themselves to solve hard, complex problems. A single individual can buy a cell phone but they must learn how to use the applications. A person can register for a facebook account but they must learn to maneuver through the site. Technology is not only advancing civilization but teaching people problem solving techniques, more reliable communication, and how to be independent.
In closing, while technology can create some seclusion it can also bring about better social networking and self reliance. As a nation we need to delineate between placing ourselves in shell versus putting ourselves out there to better our own advancement in society. How we interact is a choice and technology or not the choice is ours.
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As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
I made a typo in my essay. The last sentence of paragraph 3 should read: "These sites are NOT substitutes for natural, physical communication, but they supplement real world experiences."
ReplyDeleteEven though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
ReplyDeleteOn one hand, Twitter is a very useful tool that can be used to keep friends and followers updated on user’s lives; the networking site is also a social deterrent for many users because it distracts them from what is happening. Often when tweeters experience a significant event their first reaction is to document the situation by updating their web tool, instead of being completely invested in the moment. The time spent texting the details of the occurrence, draws their attention away from the event happening, thus desensitizing us.
In short, there is a consensus among experts that we have a biological need for human contact. To help us satisfy that need we must remember that just like any other aspect of life, the use of technology must be done in moderation. No matter how far technology advances an emoticon will never supplant an encouraging smile from your best friend, or a warm hug from a loved one. As technology becomes increasingly innovative and plays a more prominent role in our lives, we must be careful not to let it replace physical relationships.
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As technology advances in reliability and utilization Americans have become increasingly dependent on these tools. Some say the integration of social networking sites like Facebook and Twitter into our daily lives negatively affects the frequency of physical interpersonal relationships. Although it was created to bring us together, technological advances have deleterious effect of contributing to increased feelings of loneliness. As my grandmother always says, “too much of one thing, is good for nothing.” People need to remember that these forms of technology are supposed to be used as aids for socializing not as a replacement.
ReplyDeleteWhile it is true that the networking tool Facebook has proven to be a wonderful way to connect people globally, there are also offline ways to stay connected. Facebook is used for everything from promoting business endeavors to talking nostalgically with old friends. But Facebook is only one way to accomplish those ends. People today need to remember that there are other ways to stay connected with old friends or co-workers. There is still great value to driving to someone’s house and asking them how they are, instead of simply “poking” them online.
Even though it seems like every few months cellular service providers reveal new avenues for potential customers to stay connected, these technologies still aim to keep users at a distance. Recently Microsoft has promoted a new cell phone that has the primary function of allowing users to update all their favorite “friends” on various social networking sites simultaneously. While these smart phones continue to keep us technologically savvy, they still haven’t figured out a way to encourage togetherness. One cannot discuss smart phone technology without mention of the iPhone. Just a few weeks ago, Apple released a new generation of iPhone which allows users to make video calls. While it’s incredible to use technology like that which was televised on The Jetson’s; however, we must also not develop a reliance on creating relationships devoid of human contact.
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ReplyDeleteThe advancement in technology has created an amalgamation of emotion surrounding how beneficial it truly is. Some argue that technology has generated an era of loneness that is increasing along with technological advancements. Individuals today can do so much in one day without leaving the room. This includes sending emails, talking/texting friends, watching television, ordering basic essential online, etc. However, this argument fails to recognize how much more independent and self reliant people have become. In fact technology has also helped the development of relationships that may not have occurred otherwise. If we continue to look at technological tools in a negative light we will lose the positive aspects to social networking. In the following essay I will argue that civilization is not creating loneliness but in some instances increasing social networking and independence.
ReplyDeleteWith the construction of online bill paying, online shopping, the ability to work from home in numerous professions, cell phones, internet, etc. it is inevitably that some people will attempt to seclude themselves from the outside world. But humankind is made up for various different personalities. From the soft-spoken to the outspoken, from the diffident to the talkative, from the hermits to the friendly, every person is different. With that in mind it would be very difficult to take someone out of their character and force them into a lonely atmosphere. Many lonely people choose to be alone. Technology has given us numerous opportunities to network with others. This includes facebook, myspace, webcams, dating sites, video games, email, cell phones, etc. All these things are popular but they require interaction with others and many times interaction with others you would not meet otherwise.
The development of technology has been harmful to some individuals. It has taken away their sense of inclusion and placed them in a world of convoluted machinery. Not everyone is computer legit or can figure out the mechanics of a cell phone. Yet the advancement of technology helps people to reduce their dependence on the simpler things and learn to rely on themselves to solve hard, complex problems. A single individual can buy a cell phone but they must learn how to use the applications. A person can register for a facebook account but they must learn to maneuver through the site. Technology is not only advancing civilization but teaching people problem solving techniques, more reliable communication, and how to be independent.
In closing, while technology can create some seclusion it can also bring about better social networking and self reliance. As a nation we need to delineate between placing ourselves in shell versus putting ourselves out there to better our own advancement in society. How we interact is a choice and technology or not the choice is ours.
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Technology has been a wonderful tool that has advanced society and made life easier. With just one touch of a button I can call my dad half-way around the world and see and hear him through my laptop. I no longer have to wait weeks for the letter to come in the mail; I can look in the inbox of my email with my cell phone. If I want pizza from Papa John’s, there is no need to call; I can order it online. These are great tools that aid us as our society continues to move at a fast pace but they are consequently driving us away from human interaction. Therefore the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created increasing loneliness in modern society. In this paper, I will argue that texting and “surfing the net” do more harm than good.
ReplyDeleteTexting is relatively new idea and has only taken off in the past 10 to 15 years. Although it makes communication quick and easy, it is also the cause of more and more car accidents, language and grammar deficiencies among frequent users, and strain among interpersonal relationships. With texting, there is much ambiguity and much of what is written can be left up to the interpretation of those who receive the message, whether it is good or bad. Texting allows for a person to write what they would not otherwise say in the presence of another person. This is not necessarily a good thing because it does not teach you how to deal with confrontation or different personalities. Texting is also a means of pushing people away. When we do not want to deal with certain individuals or we do not want to hold lengthy conversations, we just send a text message. With our society moving as fast as it does, sometimes direct communication is difficult but not trying will result in an unbelievable awkwardness once you do come face to face with another person. Although the ways of our society may help to contribute to our loneliness we add to it by continuing to use this form of communication. Texting leads to serious problems but “surfing the net” may create even more loneliness.
Surfing the internet is one of the most convenient things that we can do. We can find and keep in touch with friends we have not talked to in decades, shop for clothing, play games, and search for hundreds recipes for the perfect barbeque wings in less than 10 seconds. It is great thing but people are becoming addicted to the internet. The average person spends 8 and ¾ of an hour on the internet per week, according to dailysource.org. It is a significant amount when you factor in the rest of a regular day. This number only continues to increase. As we spend exponentially more time on the internet, we are spending less time outside talking to our neighbors and less time with our families, which lead to the loneliness. Joyce Vincent was in her apartment decomposing for two years according to the Loneliness and Technology article. People get so engrossed in technology they alienate themselves from other people. It is horrible that this woman lay in her home alone decomposing because she was immersed in technology. Surfing the net for hours on end only isolates you from the outside world and leads to loneliness.
In conclusion, technology is a wonderful thing but it does not come without negative consequences. “Texting” and “surfing the net” is an expedient way of finding out the things we need to know without having social contact. Our fast-paced society fuels the need to spend more time away from people but we continue to entertain the idea by engaging in these activities. If we were to spend a little less time texting and less time surfing the internet and spend more time with family and friends, we might find that we do not have to be lonely at all.
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Technology has been a wonderful tool that has advanced society and made life easier. With just one touch of a button I can call my dad half-way around the world and see and hear him through my laptop. I no longer have to wait weeks for the letter to come in the mail; I can look in the inbox of my email with my cell phone. If I want pizza from Papa John’s, there is no need to call; I can order it online. These are great tools that aid us as our society continues to move at a fast pace but they are consequently driving us away from human interaction. Therefore the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created increasing loneliness in modern society. In this paper, I will argue that texting and “surfing the net” do more harm than good.
ReplyDeleteTexting is relatively new idea and has only taken off in the past 10 to 15 years. Although it makes communication quick and easy, it is also the cause of more and more car accidents, language and grammar deficiencies among frequent users, and strain among interpersonal relationships. With texting, there is much ambiguity and much of what is written can be left up to the interpretation of those who receive the message, whether it is good or bad. Texting allows for a person to write what they would not otherwise say in the presence of another person. This is not necessarily a good thing because it does not teach you how to deal with confrontation or different personalities. Texting is also a means of pushing people away. When we do not want to deal with certain individuals or we do not want to hold lengthy conversations, we just send a text message. With our society moving as fast as it does, sometimes direct communication is difficult but not trying will result in an unbelievable awkwardness once you do come face to face with another person. Although the ways of our society may help to contribute to our loneliness we add to it by continuing to use this form of communication. Texting leads to serious problems but “surfing the net” may create even more loneliness.
Surfing the internet is one of the most convenient things that we can do. We can find and keep in touch with friends we have not talked to in decades, shop for clothing, play games, and search for hundreds recipes for the perfect barbeque wings in less than 10 seconds. It is great thing but people are becoming addicted to the internet. The average person spends 8 and ¾ of an hour on the internet per week, according to dailysource.org. It is a significant amount when you factor in the rest of a regular day. This number only continues to increase. As we spend exponentially more time on the internet, we are spending less time outside talking to our neighbors and less time with our families, which lead to the loneliness. Joyce Vincent was in her apartment decomposing for two years according to the Loneliness and Technology article. People get so engrossed in technology they alienate themselves from other people. It is horrible that this woman lay in her home alone decomposing because she was immersed in technology. Surfing the net for hours on end only isolates you from the outside world and leads to loneliness.
In conclusion, technology is a wonderful thing but it does not come without negative consequences. “Texting” and “surfing the net” is an expedient way of finding out the things we need to know without having social contact. Our fast-paced society fuels the need to spend more time away from people but we continue to entertain the idea by engaging in these activities. If we were to spend a little less time texting and less time surfing the internet and spend more time with family and friends, we might find that we do not have to be lonely at all.
Technology has been a wonderful tool that has advanced society and made life easier. With just one touch of a button I can call my dad half-way around the world and see and hear him through my laptop. I no longer have to wait weeks for the letter to come in the mail; I can look in the inbox of my email with my cell phone. If I want pizza from Papa John’s, there is no need to call; I can order it online. These are great tools that aid us as our society continues to move at a fast pace but they are consequently driving us away from human interaction. Therefore the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created increasing loneliness in modern society. In this paper, I will argue that texting and “surfing the net” do more harm than good.
ReplyDeleteTexting is relatively new idea and has only taken off in the past 10 to 15 years. Although it makes communication quick and easy, it is also the cause of more and more car accidents, language and grammar deficiencies among frequent users, and strain among interpersonal relationships. With texting, there is much ambiguity and much of what is written can be left up to the interpretation of those who receive the message, whether it is good or bad. Texting allows for a person to write what they would not otherwise say in the presence of another person. This is not necessarily a good thing because it does not teach you how to deal with confrontation or different personalities. Texting is also a means of pushing people away. When we do not want to deal with certain individuals or we do not want to hold lengthy conversations, we just send a text message. With our society moving as fast as it does, sometimes direct communication is difficult but not trying will result in an unbelievable awkwardness once you do come face to face with another person. Although the ways of our society may help to contribute to our loneliness we add to it by continuing to use this form of communication. Texting leads to serious problems but “surfing the net” may create even more loneliness.
Surfing the internet is one of the most convenient things that we can do. We can find and keep in touch with friends we have not talked to in decades, shop for clothing, play games, and search for hundreds recipes for the perfect barbeque wings in less than 10 seconds. It is great thing but people are becoming addicted to the internet. The average person spends 8 and ¾ of an hour on the internet per week, according to dailysource.org. It is a significant amount when you factor in the rest of a regular day. This number only continues to increase. As we spend exponentially more time on the internet, we are spending less time outside talking to our neighbors and less time with our families, which lead to the loneliness. Joyce Vincent was in her apartment decomposing for two years according to the Loneliness and Technology article. People get so engrossed in technology they alienate themselves from other people. It is horrible that this woman lay in her home alone decomposing because she was immersed in technology. Surfing the net for hours on end only isolates you from the outside world and leads to loneliness.
In conclusion, technology is a wonderful thing but it does not come without negative consequences. “Texting” and “surfing the net” is an expedient way of finding out the things we need to know without having social contact. Our fast-paced society fuels the need to spend more time away from people but we continue to entertain the idea by engaging in these activities. If we were to spend a little less time texting and less time surfing the internet and spend more time with family and friends, we might find that we do not have to be lonely at all.
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Technology has been a wonderful tool that has advanced society and made life easier. With just one touch of a button I can call my dad half-way around the world and see and hear him through my laptop. I no longer have to wait weeks for the letter to come in the mail; I can look in the inbox of my email with my cell phone. If I want pizza from Papa John’s, there is no need to call; I can order it online. These are great tools that aid us as our society continues to move at a fast pace but they are consequently driving us away from human interaction. Therefore the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created increasing loneliness in modern society. In this paper, I will argue that texting and “surfing the net” do more harm than good.
ReplyDeleteTexting is relatively new idea and has only taken off in the past 10 to 15 years. Although it makes communication quick and easy, it is also the cause of more and more car accidents, language and grammar deficiencies among frequent users, and strain among interpersonal relationships. With texting, there is much ambiguity and much of what is written can be left up to the interpretation of those who receive the message, whether it is good or bad. Texting allows for a person to write what they would not otherwise say in the presence of another person. This is not necessarily a good thing because it does not teach you how to deal with confrontation or different personalities. Texting is also a means of pushing people away. When we do not want to deal with certain individuals or we do not want to hold lengthy conversations, we just send a text message. With our society moving as fast as it does, sometimes direct communication is difficult but not trying will result in an unbelievable awkwardness once you do come face to face with another person. Although the ways of our society may help to contribute to our loneliness we add to it by continuing to use this form of communication. Texting leads to serious problems but “surfing the net” may create even more loneliness.
Surfing the internet is one of the most convenient things that we can do. We can find and keep in touch with friends we have not talked to in decades, shop for clothing, play games, and search for hundreds recipes for the perfect barbeque wings in less than 10 seconds. It is great thing but people are becoming addicted to the internet. The average person spends 8 and ¾ of an hour on the internet per week, according to dailysource.org. It is a significant amount when you factor in the rest of a regular day. This number only continues to increase. As we spend exponentially more time on the internet, we are spending less time outside talking to our neighbors and less time with our families, which lead to the loneliness. Joyce Vincent was in her apartment decomposing for two years according to the Loneliness and Technology article. People get so engrossed in technology they alienate themselves from other people. It is horrible that this woman lay in her home alone decomposing because she was immersed in technology. Surfing the net for hours on end only isolates you from the outside world and leads to loneliness.
In conclusion, technology is a wonderful thing but it does not come without negative consequences. “Texting” and “surfing the net” is an expedient way of finding out the things we need to know without having social contact. Our fast-paced society fuels the need to spend more time away from people but we continue to entertain the idea by engaging in these activities. If we were to spend a little less time texting and less time surfing the internet and spend more time with family and friends, we might find that we do not have to be lonely at all.
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@ Wuroh,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job at portraying your ideas on the topic. I had the opposite view but I could definitely see where you were coming from with your thought process. I feel as though technology is a double-edged and there is a lot of good and a lot of bad that comes with technology. In the end, I feel like the affects technology has will differ from person to person depending on how they choose to use this resource.
Technology has been a wonderful tool that has advanced society and made life easier. With just one touch of a button I can call my dad half-way around the world and see and hear him through my laptop. I no longer have to wait weeks for the letter to come in the mail; I can look in the inbox of my email with my cell phone. If I want pizza from Papa John’s, there is no need to call; I can order it online. These are great tools that aid us as our society continues to move at a fast pace but they are consequently driving us away from human interaction. Therefore the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created increasing loneliness in modern society. In this paper, I will argue that texting and “surfing the net” do more harm than good.
ReplyDeleteTexting is relatively new idea and has only taken off in the past 10 to 15 years. Although it makes communication quick and easy, it is also the cause of more and more car accidents, language and grammar deficiencies among frequent users, and strain among interpersonal relationships. With texting, there is much ambiguity and much of what is written can be left up to the interpretation of those who receive the message, whether it is good or bad. Texting allows for a person to write what they would not otherwise say in the presence of another person. This is not necessarily a good thing because it does not teach you how to deal with confrontation or different personalities. Texting is also a means of pushing people away. When we do not want to deal with certain individuals or we do not want to hold lengthy conversations, we just send a text message. With our society moving as fast as it does, sometimes direct communication is difficult but not trying will result in an unbelievable awkwardness once you do come face to face with another person. Although the ways of our society may help to contribute to our loneliness we add to it by continuing to use this form of communication. Texting leads to serious problems but “surfing the net” may create even more loneliness.
Surfing the internet is one of the most convenient things that we can do. We can find and keep in touch with friends we have not talked to in decades, shop for clothing, play games, and search for hundreds recipes for the perfect barbeque wings in less than 10 seconds. It is great thing but people are becoming addicted to the internet. The average person spends 8 and ¾ of an hour on the internet per week, according to dailysource.org. It is a significant amount when you factor in the rest of a regular day. This number only continues to increase. As we spend exponentially more time on the internet, we are spending less time outside talking to our neighbors and less time with our families, which lead to the loneliness. Joyce Vincent was in her apartment decomposing for two years according to the Loneliness and Technology article. People get so engrossed in technology they alienate themselves from other people. It is horrible that this woman lay in her home alone decomposing because she was immersed in technology. Surfing the net for hours on end only isolates you from the outside world and leads to loneliness.
In conclusion, technology is a wonderful thing but it does not come without negative consequences. “Texting” and “surfing the net” is an expedient way of finding out the things we need to know without having social contact. Our fast-paced society fuels the need to spend more time away from people but we continue to entertain the idea by engaging in these activities. If we were to spend a little less time texting and less time surfing the internet and spend more time with family and friends, we might find that we do not have to be lonely at all.
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ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you provide both sides of an argument - positive and negative. The examples make your essay stronger and in specific I like when you mention facebook and computer cameras. It was a cogent essay because you have a strong thesis statement.
The advancement in technology has created an amalgamation of emotion surrounding how beneficial it truly is. Some argue that technology has generated an era of loneness that is increasing along with technological advancements. Individuals today can do so much in one day without leaving the room. This includes sending emails, talking/texting friends, watching television, ordering basic essential online, etc. However, this argument fails to recognize how much more independent and self reliant people have become. In fact technology has also helped the development of relationships that may not have occurred otherwise. If we continue to look at technological tools in a negative light we will lose the positive aspects to social networking. In the following essay I will argue that civilization is not creating loneliness but in some instances increasing social networking and independence.
ReplyDeleteWith the construction of online bill paying, online shopping, the ability to work from home in numerous professions, cell phones, internet, etc. it is inevitably that some people will attempt to seclude themselves from the outside world. But humankind is made up for various different personalities. From the soft-spoken to the outspoken, from the diffident to the talkative, from the hermits to the friendly, every person is different. With that in mind it would be very difficult to take someone out of their character and force them into a lonely atmosphere. Many lonely people choose to be alone. Technology has given us numerous opportunities to network with others. This includes facebook, myspace, webcams, dating sites, video games, email, cell phones, etc. All these things are popular but they require interaction with others and many times interaction with others you would not meet otherwise.
The development of technology has been harmful to some individuals. It has taken away their sense of inclusion and placed them in a world of convoluted machinery. Not everyone is computer legit or can figure out the mechanics of a cell phone. Yet the advancement of technology helps people to reduce their dependence on the simpler things and learn to rely on themselves to solve hard, complex problems. A single individual can buy a cell phone but they must learn how to use the applications. A person can register for a facebook account but they must learn to maneuver through the site. Technology is not only advancing civilization but teaching people problem solving techniques, more reliable communication, and how to be independent.
In closing, while technology can create some seclusion it can also bring about better social networking and self reliance. As a nation we need to delineate between placing ourselves in shell versus putting ourselves out there to better our own advancement in society. How we interact is a choice and technology or not the choice is ours.
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It is undeniable the technological boom that has taken place since the mid nineties. “Dot com” businesses and services have taken off and have made millions, allowing people to connect to the world around them in completely new ways. These connections have only been fortified as social networking sites and online gaming institutions that continue to gain popularity. Sites like “Facebook“ and “Twitter” effortlessly gain millions of new users each year and time spent playing video games over the internet has been on a steady increase for the past three years. However, while it can also be said that these connections are bringing people together, they also appear to be pushing people to becoming more and more lonely and secluded.
ReplyDeleteIt is estimated that over four hundred million people spend more than eight million hours on Facebook each month. These are hours spent communicating with friends and family, and yet not actually interacting with them. Instead, millions are sitting alone at a computer screens, not building, or strengthening, face-to-face personal relationships. Moreover, even the most intimate of interpersonal interactions have gone cyber. Dating sites generate millions of dollars from millions of users, where people can meet from all corners of the globe. For many, dating has become relegated to emails and personal messages. Additionally, there are tens of millions more spending comparable amounts of time playing video games online. Averaged out at four hundred and sixteen hours per user annually, people are becoming more and more secluded as time spent online also increases annually. On the one side of the issue, many argue that while these millions are participating alone in their activities, they are able to connect with people through them. After all, each user is simply one amongst millions. Contradictorily, often these interactions are purely superficial, just typed words from one person to another with no interpersonal interaction taking place. As evidence, one simply has to look at those who have become so addicted to these virtual realities that deaths have resulted.
Video game addiction has become a serious issue, with doctors pushing for it to being recognized by the American Medical Association. News sources have reported people of all ages having locked themselves away for days at a time, dying from exhaustion and malnutrition. The medium of gaming itself has become an addiction, as others have committed murder due to their games being destroyed or confiscated.
In closing, to say that our lives have become completely wired is seemingly an understatement. Almost every segment of existence can be done alone, over the internet, be it work, shopping, dating, religious observance or life itself. People are spending numerous hours in self-imposed exile for hours if not days on end, and the number of hours doing so is on the rise each year. Social networks may be shrinking the world and bringing their users together, but it is unfortunate that those users are often sitting alone.
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It is undeniable the technological boom that has taken place since the mid nineties. “Dot com” businesses and services have taken off and have made millions, allowing people to connect to the world around them in completely new ways. These connections have only been fortified as social networking sites and online gaming institutions that continue to gain popularity. Sites like “Facebook“ and “Twitter” effortlessly gain millions of new users each year and time spent playing video games over the internet has been on a steady increase for the past three years. However, while it can also be said that these connections are bringing people together, they also appear to be pushing people to becoming more and more lonely and secluded.
ReplyDeleteIt is estimated that over four hundred million people spend more than eight million hours on Facebook each month. These are hours spent communicating with friends and family, and yet not actually interacting with them. Instead, millions are sitting alone at a computer screens, not building, or strengthening, face-to-face personal relationships. Moreover, even the most intimate of interpersonal interactions have gone cyber. Dating sites generate millions of dollars from millions of users, where people can meet from all corners of the globe. For many, dating has become relegated to emails and personal messages. Additionally, there are tens of millions more spending comparable amounts of time playing video games online. Averaged out at four hundred and sixteen hours per user annually, people are becoming more and more secluded as time spent online also increases annually. On the one side of the issue, many argue that while these millions are participating alone in their activities, they are able to connect with people through them. After all, each user is simply one amongst millions. Contradictorily, often these interactions are purely superficial, just typed words from one person to another with no interpersonal interaction taking place. As evidence, one simply has to look at those who have become so addicted to these virtual realities that deaths have resulted.
Video game addiction has become a serious issue, with doctors pushing for it to being recognized by the American Medical Association. News sources have reported people of all ages having locked themselves away for days at a time, dying from exhaustion and malnutrition. The medium of gaming itself has become an addiction, as others have committed murder due to their games being destroyed or confiscated.
In closing, to say that our lives have become completely wired is seemingly an understatement. Almost every segment of existence can be done alone, over the internet, be it work, shopping, dating, religious observance or life itself. People are spending numerous hours in self-imposed exile for hours if not days on end, and the number of hours doing so is on the rise each year. Social networks may be shrinking the world and bringing their users together, but it is unfortunate that those users are often sitting alone.
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In modern society, the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created a vast amount of opportunity for people to network with no borders. The technological advances during the current time period have contributed to society. Although some may perceive the technological tools and the uses to hinder the communication between individuals, many see the advancements as a limitless scope. I will argue that technology and its many tools have benefited the public in ways that bring people together rather than increasing loneliness.
ReplyDeleteSocial networking websites like facebook, myspace or twitter have been progressively accused of creating a separation from the real world and the cyber world. On the other hand, these social networking websites can be viewed as a tool that people use to decrease loneliness. Young adults using tools like these websites can invite people to their birthday parties plan an event or even just chat online when they cannot be reached otherwise. People can connect from different areas of the country or even different area on campus. With the type of innovation in technology we now have created an ideal place for socialization where even a diffident person could network without difficulty.
Technological tools like cellular phones, text messaging and video chatting have also been accused of creating a lonely environment for contemporary society. These same utensils of technology bring families together from all over the globe who have not socialized with one another for a period of days, months and even years. Lonely students who travel on study abroad trips with universities are usually home sick and want to communicate with their families. The advancements in technology allow for the students to connect with their families from home and they even get to see them face-to-face. These devices act as a deterrent to solitude in many cases because most individuals easily access them. In a recent advertisement for Oreo cookies, it displays a father and a child sharing a glass of milk and cookies over the computer even though they are in completely different countries. This shows that technological advancements brings people together even in antipodal sides of the world.
In conclusion many can reach a consensus that the advancements in technology have created opportunity for social interactions in the current world. The popularity in social networking websites show that more and more people are beginning to expand their network of friends into a global perspective. In 2010, the world could not be more connected with the tools of technology and the uses to which humanity has put them.
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It is undeniable the technological boom that has taken place since the mid nineties. “Dot com” businesses and services have taken off and have made millions, allowing people to connect to the world around them in completely new ways. These connections have only been fortified as social networking sites and online gaming institutions that continue to gain popularity. Sites like “Facebook“ and “Twitter” effortlessly gain millions of new users each year and time spent playing video games over the internet has been on a steady increase for the past three years. However, while it can also be said that these connections are bringing people together, they also appear to be pushing people to becoming more and more lonely and secluded.
ReplyDeleteIt is estimated that over four hundred million people spend more than eight million hours on Facebook each month. These are hours spent communicating with friends and family, and yet not actually interacting with them. Instead, millions are sitting alone at a computer screens, not building, or strengthening, face-to-face personal relationships. Moreover, even the most intimate of interpersonal interactions have gone cyber. Dating sites generate millions of dollars from millions of users, where people can meet from all corners of the globe. For many, dating has become relegated to emails and personal messages. Additionally, there are tens of millions more spending comparable amounts of time playing video games online. Averaged out at four hundred and sixteen hours per user annually, people are becoming more and more secluded as time spent online also increases annually. On the one side of the issue, many argue that while these millions are participating alone in their activities, they are able to connect with people through them. After all, each user is simply one amongst millions. Contradictorily, often these interactions are purely superficial, just typed words from one person to another with no interpersonal interaction taking place. As evidence, one simply has to look at those who have become so addicted to these virtual realities that deaths have resulted.
Video game addiction has become a serious issue, with doctors pushing for it to being recognized by the American Medical Association. News sources have reported people of all ages having locked themselves away for days at a time, dying from exhaustion and malnutrition. The medium of gaming itself has become an addiction, as others have committed murder due to their games being destroyed or confiscated.
In closing, to say that our lives have become completely wired is seemingly an understatement. Almost every segment of existence can be done alone, over the internet, be it work, shopping, dating, religious observance or life itself. People are spending numerous hours in self-imposed exile for hours if not days on end, and the number of hours doing so is on the rise each year. Social networks may be shrinking the world and bringing their users together, but it is unfortunate that those users are often sitting alone.
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In modern society, the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created a vast amount of opportunity for people to network with no borders. The technological advances during the current time period have contributed to society. Although some may perceive the technological tools and the uses to hinder the communication between individuals, many see the advancements as a limitless scope. I will argue that technology and its many tools have benefited the public in ways that bring people together rather than increasing loneliness.
ReplyDeleteSocial networking websites like facebook, myspace or twitter have been progressively accused of creating a separation from the real world and the cyber world. On the other hand, these social networking websites can be viewed as a tool that people use to decrease loneliness. Young adults using tools like these websites can invite people to their birthday parties plan an event or even just chat online when they cannot be reached otherwise. People can connect from different areas of the country or even different area on campus. With the type of innovation in technology we now have created an ideal place for socialization where even a diffident person could network without difficulty.
Technological tools like cellular phones, text messaging and video chatting have also been accused of creating a lonely environment for contemporary society. These same utensils of technology bring families together from all over the globe who have not socialized with one another for a period of days, months and even years. Lonely students who travel on study abroad trips with universities are usually home sick and want to communicate with their families. The advancements in technology allow for the students to connect with their families from home and they even get to see them face-to-face. These devices act as a deterrent to solitude in many cases because most individuals easily access them. In a recent advertisement for Oreo cookies, it displays a father and a child sharing a glass of milk and cookies over the computer even though they are in completely different countries. This shows that technological advancements brings people together even in antipodal sides of the world.
In conclusion many can reach a consensus that the advancements in technology have created opportunity for social interactions in the current world. The popularity in social networking websites show that more and more people are beginning to expand their network of friends into a global perspective. In 2010, the world could not be more connected with the tools of technology and the uses to which humanity has put them.
Experts claim that both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook provide to users a social interaction with both national and international users. Technological tools have replaced physical interaction by virtual interaction allowing a greater social interaction. I will argue how loneliness seems to be increasing because physical interaction has been replaced by virtual interaction however this does not indicate that loneliness is ever increasing due to technological development.
ReplyDeleteExperts claim that the development in technological tools have created a society in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook, myspace, twitter and other social networks provide social interaction with people from around the world. Through these tools users are able to share their personal and professional interests bringing them closer to those users who share similar interests. In today’s’ society humans are able to communicate with people from miles apart reducing the possibility of loneliness, if the tools are properly use.
Technological tools provide a wide range of social interaction through the virtual world allowing social interaction for twenty four hours per day. Although our technology provides all these tools for social interaction, there are people who refuse to adapt these new forms of communication. Among those people are the elderly and others who may have difficulties adapting to new technology and those who feel fear. If a person feels lonely is not due to the development in technology, but rather to their personality. The main cause of loneliness in today’s society is human dread. Many people refuse to use social networks and share their interests due to dread of being judge by others, especially by close friends and family or they are moderately concern about the security of their personal information. Human being care more about what others think, than about living and using new tools to explore new ways of communicating and living. Human fear is pushing us away from development not technology.
One of the reasons why experts claim that loneliness is ever increasing even with the increment in technological tools is because physical interactions among humans have decreased over the years. The reason why physical interaction has decreased is because there is not need for physical interaction with the new forms of communications that surround us. In our modern society people prefer to have a social interaction through the web with a person with similar interest, rather than having a physical interaction with someone who does not share any interests or believes.
In conclusion fear to a new form of interaction is increasing loneliness among humans, not technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them. Since people are afraid of using these tools, they creation of these tools is futile. The increment in loneliness is due to us humans not to human made machines. Human’s nature is to blame someone for our own errors.
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Experts claim that both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook provide to users a social interaction with both national and international users. Technological tools have replaced physical interaction by virtual interaction allowing a greater social interaction. I will argue how loneliness seems to be increasing because physical interaction has been replaced by virtual interaction however this does not indicate that loneliness is ever increasing due to technological development.
ReplyDeleteExperts claim that the development in technological tools have created a society in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook, myspace, twitter and other social networks provide social interaction with people from around the world. Through these tools users are able to share their personal and professional interests bringing them closer to those users who share similar interests. In today’s’ society humans are able to communicate with people from miles apart reducing the possibility of loneliness, if the tools are properly use.
Technological tools provide a wide range of social interaction through the virtual world allowing social interaction for twenty four hours per day. Although our technology provides all these tools for social interaction, there are people who refuse to adapt these new forms of communication. Among those people are the elderly and others who may have difficulties adapting to new technology and those who feel fear. If a person feels lonely is not due to the development in technology, but rather to their personality. The main cause of loneliness in today’s society is human dread. Many people refuse to use social networks and share their interests due to dread of being judge by others, especially by close friends and family or they are moderately concern about the security of their personal information. Human being care more about what others think, than about living and using new tools to explore new ways of communicating and living. Human fear is pushing us away from development not technology.
One of the reasons why experts claim that loneliness is ever increasing even with the increment in technological tools is because physical interactions among humans have decreased over the years. The reason why physical interaction has decreased is because there is not need for physical interaction with the new forms of communications that surround us. In our modern society people prefer to have a social interaction through the web with a person with similar interest, rather than having a physical interaction with someone who does not share any interests or believes.
In conclusion fear to a new form of interaction is increasing loneliness among humans, not technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them. Since people are afraid of using these tools, they creation of these tools is futile. The increment in loneliness is due to us humans not to human made machines. Human’s nature is to blame someone for our own errors.
Experts claim that both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook provide to users a social interaction with both national and international users. Technological tools have replaced physical interaction by virtual interaction allowing a greater social interaction. I will argue how loneliness seems to be increasing because physical interaction has been replaced by virtual interaction however this does not indicate that loneliness is ever increasing due to technological development.
ReplyDeleteExperts claim that the development in technological tools have created a society in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook, myspace, twitter and other social networks provide social interaction with people from around the world. Through these tools users are able to share their personal and professional interests bringing them closer to those users who share similar interests. In today’s’ society humans are able to communicate with people from miles apart reducing the possibility of loneliness, if the tools are properly use.
Technological tools provide a wide range of social interaction through the virtual world allowing social interaction for twenty four hours per day. Although our technology provides all these tools for social interaction, there are people who refuse to adapt these new forms of communication. Among those people are the elderly and others who may have difficulties adapting to new technology and those who feel fear. If a person feels lonely is not due to the development in technology, but rather to their personality. The main cause of loneliness in today’s society is human dread. Many people refuse to use social networks and share their interests due to dread of being judge by others, especially by close friends and family or they are moderately concern about the security of their personal information. Human being care more about what others think, than about living and using new tools to explore new ways of communicating and living. Human fear is pushing us away from development not technology.
One of the reasons why experts claim that loneliness is ever increasing even with the increment in technological tools is because physical interactions among humans have decreased over the years. The reason why physical interaction has decreased is because there is not need for physical interaction with the new forms of communications that surround us. In our modern society people prefer to have a social interaction through the web with a person with similar interest, rather than having a physical interaction with someone who does not share any interests or believes.
In conclusion fear to a new form of interaction is increasing loneliness among humans, not technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them. Since people are afraid of using these tools, they creation of these tools is futile. The increment in loneliness is due to us humans not to human made machines. Human’s nature is to blame someone for our own errors.
Experts claim that both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook provide to users a social interaction with both national and international users. Technological tools have replaced physical interaction by virtual interaction allowing a greater social interaction. I will argue how loneliness seems to be increasing because physical interaction has been replaced by virtual interaction however this does not indicate that loneliness is ever increasing due to technological development.
ReplyDeleteExperts claim that the development in technological tools have created a society in which loneliness is ever increasing, however social networks such as facebook, myspace, twitter and other social networks provide social interaction with people from around the world. Through these tools users are able to share their personal and professional interests bringing them closer to those users who share similar interests. In today’s’ society humans are able to communicate with people from miles apart reducing the possibility of loneliness, if the tools are properly use.
Technological tools provide a wide range of social interaction through the virtual world allowing social interaction for twenty four hours per day. Although our technology provides all these tools for social interaction, there are people who refuse to adapt these new forms of communication. Among those people are the elderly and others who may have difficulties adapting to new technology and those who feel fear. If a person feels lonely is not due to the development in technology, but rather to their personality. The main cause of loneliness in today’s society is human dread. Many people refuse to use social networks and share their interests due to dread of being judge by others, especially by close friends and family or they are moderately concern about the security of their personal information. Human being care more about what others think, than about living and using new tools to explore new ways of communicating and living. Human fear is pushing us away from development not technology.
One of the reasons why experts claim that loneliness is ever increasing even with the increment in technological tools is because physical interactions among humans have decreased over the years. The reason why physical interaction has decreased is because there is not need for physical interaction with the new forms of communications that surround us. In our modern society people prefer to have a social interaction through the web with a person with similar interest, rather than having a physical interaction with someone who does not share any interests or believes.
In conclusion fear to a new form of interaction is increasing loneliness among humans, not technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them. Since people are afraid of using these tools, they creation of these tools is futile. The increment in loneliness is due to us humans not to human made machines. Human’s nature is to blame someone for our own errors.
The advancement of technology and society’s movement into a more digital age is perceived as a purely beneficial and positive linear progression for civilization. However, the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing. If we continue to deny the sensory deprivation and ignore the limitations of physical interaction brought on by digitization, human interactions will become completely detached and depersonalized. This will force humanity to have to adapt into beings of solitude and alienation, rather than social and communal beings.
ReplyDeleteOur constant reliance on technology and new media interconnectivity has perpetuated our shift into automatons. In as short a time as ten years, we have replaced so many analog processes in favor for digital. The one component, which separates digital from analog, is the lack of tactile interaction. Countless everyday items have either slowly been conflated into one digital entity or have been replaced to exist solely in a digital format. Telephones have gained versatility by becoming an amalgamation of computers, maps, calculators, games, alarm clocks, and letters with the added bonus of instant gratification, right at your fingertips. These virtual manifestations have not only contributed to the inevitable plight of humanity, but limit how we use our physicality to interact with physical matter. We lose a part of ourselves when we no longer have to unfold and try to refold paper maps. It is not as meaningful when we send an email, as opposed to a hand written letter. We are physical vessels in a material world, and it is important to the continuation of social interactions for people to stimulate their senses and engage multi-sensorially using sight, sound, touch, and olfaction.
As we become more dependent on technology we lose a part of our physicality and humanness. We think less, and depend more upon machinery and technology to delivery thoughts and ideas to us. In essence this is where my aforementioned idea of the automaton, or the cyborg comes into existence. Where the human being and machine meld into one autonomous functioning unit. However with this marriage, we see great compromises and sacrifices to exist. This in particular within the greater abilities of the human being- emotion and abstract thought. As man and machine unit into the cyborgian automaton the ability to physically and mentally feel are lost. Society becomes alienated because the individual components that were once unique human beings evolve into these self-enclosed systems operating through a façade of digital technology.
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ReplyDeleteThe advancement in technology has created an amalgamation of emotion surrounding how beneficial it truly is. Some argue that technology has generated an era of loneness that is increasing along with technological advancements. Individuals today can do so much in one day without leaving the room. This includes sending emails, talking/texting friends, watching television, ordering basic essential online, etc. However, this argument fails to recognize how much more independent and self reliant people have become. In fact technology has also helped the development of relationships that may not have occurred otherwise. If we continue to look at technological tools in a negative light we will lose the positive aspects to social networking. In the following essay I will argue that civilization is not creating loneliness but in some instances increasing social networking and independence.
ReplyDeleteWith the construction of online bill paying, online shopping, the ability to work from home in numerous professions, cell phones, internet, etc. it is inevitably that some people will attempt to seclude themselves from the outside world. But humankind is made up for various different personalities. From the soft-spoken to the outspoken, from the diffident to the talkative, from the hermits to the friendly, every person is different. With that in mind it would be very difficult to take someone out of their character and force them into a lonely atmosphere. Many lonely people choose to be alone. Technology has given us numerous opportunities to network with others. This includes facebook, myspace, webcams, dating sites, video games, email, cell phones, etc. All these things are popular but they require interaction with others and many times interaction with others you would not meet otherwise.
The development of technology has been harmful to some individuals. It has taken away their sense of inclusion and placed them in a world of convoluted machinery. Not everyone is computer legit or can figure out the mechanics of a cell phone. Yet the advancement of technology helps people to reduce their dependence on the simpler things and learn to rely on themselves to solve hard, complex problems. A single individual can buy a cell phone but they must learn how to use the applications. A person can register for a facebook account but they must learn to maneuver through the site. Technology is not only advancing civilization but teaching people problem solving techniques, more reliable communication, and how to be independent.
In closing, while technology can create some seclusion it can also bring about better social networking and self reliance. As a nation we need to delineate between placing ourselves in shell versus putting ourselves out there to better our own advancement in society. How we interact is a choice and technology or not the choice is ours.
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ReplyDeleteThe advancement of technology and society’s movement into a more digital age is perceived as a purely beneficial and positive linear progression for civilization. However, the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing. If we continue to deny the sensory deprivation and ignore the limitations of physical interaction brought on by digitization, human interactions will become completely detached and depersonalized. This will force humanity to have to adapt into beings of solitude and alienation, rather than social and communal beings.
ReplyDeleteOur constant reliance on technology and new media interconnectivity has perpetuated our shift into automatons. In as short a time as ten years, we have replaced so many analog processes in favor for digital. The one component, which separates digital from analog, is the lack of tactile interaction. Countless everyday items have either slowly been conflated into one digital entity or have been replaced to exist solely in a digital format. Telephones have gained versatility by becoming an amalgamation of computers, maps, calculators, games, alarm clocks, and letters with the added bonus of instant gratification, right at your fingertips. These virtual manifestations have not only contributed to the inevitable plight of humanity, but limit how we use our physicality to interact with physical matter. We lose a part of ourselves when we no longer have to unfold and try to refold paper maps. It is not as meaningful when we send an email, as opposed to a hand written letter. We are physical vessels in a material world, and it is important to the continuation of social interactions for people to stimulate their senses and engage multi-sensorially using sight, sound, touch, and olfaction.
As we become more dependent on technology we lose a part of our physicality and humanness. We think less, and depend more upon machinery and technology to delivery thoughts and ideas to us. In essence this is where my aforementioned idea of the automaton, or the cyborg comes into existence. Where the human being and machine meld into one autonomous functioning unit. However with this marriage, we see great compromises and sacrifices to exist. This in particular within the greater abilities of the human being- emotion and abstract thought. As man and machine unit into the cyborgian automaton the ability to physically and mentally feel are lost. Society becomes alienated because the individual components that were once unique human beings evolve into these self-enclosed systems operating through a façade of digital technology.
Technology has advanced quickly and constantly as the years’ progress. Some people believe that the advancement in technology is causing an increase in the loneliness of our civilization. However, while some of technology’s advancements may isolate people and limit communication, there are more communicable benefits that stem from the development of technological tools. I will argue that the development of modern technology facilitates frequent conversation, strengthens long distance relationships, and sustains communication.
ReplyDeleteSome argue that technological advancements limit face-to-face interactions. However, technology has made it easier to converse and has enabled the frequency of conversations. For example, cell phones allow one to talk at any time and location. One no longer has to wait until he/she is home to relay information or simply talk to an old friend. Without such advancements there may be less face-to-face interaction, but these intimate interactions are not always an option due to the busy lives people live. Cell phones and e-mail through certain phone applications creates a limitless opportunity to communicate.
Some technology, such as video games and iPods may isolate some from others and decrease the amount of time spent communication with people. Nevertheless, technology has the ability to reinforce long distance relationships. With the inventions of the webcam and long distance phone calling, one can communication with loved ones near or far.
The development in technology and the frequent use of this technology also maintains communication by means of many different outlets. Advancements such as Facebook, MySpace, and classmates.com assist in revival of old friendships and enhance many networking possibilities. These internet accessible websites have made it possible to find and contact old friends, to start new relationships, and have provided another method to communicate with people.
In the end, despite the type of communication that the development of technology is providing, it is not increasing the amount of loneliness of the citizens. It may limit face-to-face interactions and in-person communication skills, but it is nonetheless increasing the amount and frequency of communication, strengthening long distance relationships, and is maintaining relationships that may lose touch over the years. Some people only see the negative effects of technology; the fact that some types of technology can keep one some consumed, which in turn can cause isolation or reduction in communication and relationships. What should be noticed and appreciated of these modern advancements are the positive traits that stem and the relationships that continue to grow and remain stable. In today’s day and age, there is no way one cannot communicate; communication is all around us.
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Technology has advanced quickly and constantly as the years’ progress. Some people believe that the advancement in technology is causing an increase in the loneliness of our civilization. However, while some of technology’s advancements may isolate people and limit communication, there are more communicable benefits that stem from the development of technological tools. I will argue that the development of modern technology facilitates frequent conversation, strengthens long distance relationships, and sustains communication.
ReplyDeleteSome argue that technological advancements limit face-to-face interactions. However, technology has made it easier to converse and has enabled the frequency of conversations. For example, cell phones allow one to talk at any time and location. One no longer has to wait until he/she is home to relay information or simply talk to an old friend. Without such advancements there may be less face-to-face interaction, but these intimate interactions are not always an option due to the busy lives people live. Cell phones and e-mail through certain phone applications creates a limitless opportunity to communicate.
Some technology, such as video games and iPods may isolate some from others and decrease the amount of time spent communication with people. Nevertheless, technology has the ability to reinforce long distance relationships. With the inventions of the webcam and long distance phone calling, one can communication with loved ones near or far.
The development in technology and the frequent use of this technology also maintains communication by means of many different outlets. Advancements such as Facebook, MySpace, and classmates.com assist in revival of old friendships and enhance many networking possibilities. These internet accessible websites have made it possible to find and contact old friends, to start new relationships, and have provided another method to communicate with people.
In the end, despite the type of communication that the development of technology is providing, it is not increasing the amount of loneliness of the citizens. It may limit face-to-face interactions and in-person communication skills, but it is nonetheless increasing the amount and frequency of communication, strengthening long distance relationships, and is maintaining relationships that may lose touch over the years. Some people only see the negative effects of technology; the fact that some types of technology can keep one some consumed, which in turn can cause isolation or reduction in communication and relationships. What should be noticed and appreciated of these modern advancements are the positive traits that stem and the relationships that continue to grow and remain stable. In today’s day and age, there is no way one cannot communicate; communication is all around us.
Technology has advanced quickly and constantly as the years’ progress. Some people believe that the advancement in technology is causing an increase in the loneliness of our civilization. However, while some of technology’s advancements may isolate people and limit communication, there are more communicable benefits that stem from the development of technological tools. I will argue that the development of modern technology facilitates frequent conversation, strengthens long distance relationships, and sustains communication.
ReplyDeleteSome argue that technological advancements limit face-to-face interactions. However, technology has made it easier to converse and has enabled the frequency of conversations. For example, cell phones allow one to talk at any time and location. One no longer has to wait until he/she is home to relay information or simply talk to an old friend. Without such advancements there may be less face-to-face interaction, but these intimate interactions are not always an option due to the busy lives people live. Cell phones and e-mail through certain phone applications creates a limitless opportunity to communicate.
Some technology, such as video games and iPods may isolate some from others and decrease the amount of time spent communication with people. Nevertheless, technology has the ability to reinforce long distance relationships. With the inventions of the webcam and long distance phone calling, one can communication with loved ones near or far.
The development in technology and the frequent use of this technology also maintains communication by means of many different outlets. Advancements such as Facebook, MySpace, and classmates.com assist in revival of old friendships and enhance many networking possibilities. These internet accessible websites have made it possible to find and contact old friends, to start new relationships, and have provided another method to communicate with people.
In the end, despite the type of communication that the development of technology is providing, it is not increasing the amount of loneliness of the citizens. It may limit face-to-face interactions and in-person communication skills, but it is nonetheless increasing the amount and frequency of communication, strengthening long distance relationships, and is maintaining relationships that may lose touch over the years. Some people only see the negative effects of technology; the fact that some types of technology can keep one some consumed, which in turn can cause isolation or reduction in communication and relationships. What should be noticed and appreciated of these modern advancements are the positive traits that stem and the relationships that continue to grow and remain stable. In today’s day and age, there is no way one cannot communicate; communication is all around us.
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@ Patricia,
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a very cogent essay, you were able to defend your thesis by putting examples as web-cams and the use of facebook as a way to have a faster connection with people that live far away, making this an easier way to contact them.
The increasing development of technological tools and the uses people have give them, has created a modern civilization where loneliness is greater than ever. If there is nothing to stop the loneliness from growing, then there will be a society with no personal communication, because technology alienates people from interacting with other people, deprives people from getting outside to do other physical activities, and can sometimes affect the way people perform in an academic setting. I agree that the current development of technological tools and its uses have created an era where loneliness will continue to increase.
ReplyDeleteHowever, some people feel that technological tools and it uses have help human do tasks faster and efficiently. In the other hand, others believe that technology alienates people when it comes to one to one personal interaction. This is because instead of meeting in person, people decide to use messenger, e-mail, text message, facebook or phone because is a less expensive and faster way to get in contact with others. Even though this might be faster at times it takes away that personal and more natural way of doing things and confronting people in person. This later creates a society that cannot communicate in no other way that by text messages or e-mail because they are no longer able to speak in person since they are use to do it in these other means of communication.
The advancement in technology has created tools that have been used to replace physical which means that instead of doing a physical activity like playing basketball, baseball, and soccer, kids and sometimes their parents decide to stay indoor playing videogames. In many cases, a kid can play by himself, making this kid live in an interaction free lifestyle where he can have fun even if he is alone. So, if the younger modern civilization is already living in isolation, what can we expect for future coming generations?
Moreover, technological advancement not only interrupts physical activity or interaction with other people, but it has interfered in the academic setting. The creation of devices like iPods, mp3s, and other devices has been deleterious to kids in their performance in school. This is because instead of thinking about homework or exams and creating study groups to help them study for their upcoming exams, they are thinking of what game they might play after school or if they will make it to the next level of the game they were playing. This again proves that modern society has been affected by technology, creating a civilization where loneliness is the new friend.
In conclusion, the technological tools and its uses have affected the interaction between people creating a lonesome civilization. That is why there has to be action taken regarding this situation that seems to be increasing more and more each generation. There has to be a campaign promoting more outside activities with family and friends, more reunions and communication in person rather than by e-mail, or other technological tools in order to change the direction of our civilization.
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ReplyDelete@ Patricia,
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a very cogent essay, you were able to defend your thesis by putting examples as web-cams and the use of facebook as a way to have a faster connection with people that live far away, making this an easier way to contact them. However, even though this might hem people communicate in a faster and cheaper way; you are still loosing the face to face relationship in person. Also there are other things that are affecting other types of activity that indeed create isolation.
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ReplyDeleteWith the increased usage of modern technology, our society has experienced a shift in regard to intrapersonal interactions. The time which, in the past, would have been utilized in the presence of friends or family is now occupied with a new set of friends: the computer, the internet, the cell phone, and the television. Although the debate focuses around the necessity of the aforementioned technologies, the true issue is one of modern culture. In our attempt to isolate the “problem” with society, lost is the possibility that these technologies may have evolved from our disdain for uncomfortable experiences, from our uneasiness from meeting new people, and our desire to create a new, better world; however non-real that world may be. If we continue to place blame upon the objects and not the users, we will only exacerbate the issue and will, furthermore, only deceive ourselves of the reality: it is our desire to remove all discommodities from our life.
ReplyDeleteText messaging has evolved from the use of cellular phones. It is now not only accepted, but encouraged to “text” instead of speak on the phone with friends, family, or coworkers—let alone speak in person! This new development in social interactions has lead to the degradation of intrapersonal skills in our society. Although those in opposition to such a statement argue that this innovation has lead to the ability to keep in touch with a number of people vastly greater than in the past, the ability to increase one’s networking capacity has come at too large of a price: the aggregate sum of which is, ironically, the influx of awkward interactions between those whom the technology seeks to assist.
Any discussion of awkward interactions and loss of intrapersonal skills must include the modern-craze, Facebook. The online, self-described “social (networking) utility” seeks to allow users to better communicate over time and distance. Original intentions, however, often become perverted throughout time, as is the case with Facebook. What was once a simple way by which college friends could keep in touch has become a favorite pastime of our global culture. Not only does it provide games and questionable privacy issues among “friends,” but Facebook has led to the degradation of intrapersonal skills—even among friends. Obviously, the counter-claim is that Facebook does more good than harm; that it allows friends, colleagues, and family to communicate in a more enjoyable and simple fashion. However, the use of such a powerful tool has become a detriment to human social interaction in the twenty-first century.
In conclusion, the use, not the invention, of powerful innovations such a texting, Facebook, and email is the cause of modern society’s aversion to social interaction. If we are to combat its effects, we must adapt our collective mindset to one which is more curious and open to new and potentially uncomfortable experiences. The outcome of the aforementioned actions would surely be beneficial for the entirety of society.
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With the increased usage of modern technology, our society has experienced a shift in regard to intrapersonal interactions. The time which, in the past, would have been utilized in the presence of friends or family is now occupied with a new set of friends: the computer, the internet, the cell phone, and the television. Although the debate focuses around the necessity of the aforementioned technologies, the true issue is one of modern culture. In our attempt to isolate the “problem” with society, lost is the possibility that these technologies may have evolved from our disdain for uncomfortable experiences, from our uneasiness from meeting new people, and our desire to create a new, better world; however non-real that world may be. If we continue to place blame upon the objects and not the users, we will only exacerbate the issue and will, furthermore, only deceive ourselves of the reality: it is our desire to remove all discommodities from our life.
ReplyDeleteText messaging has evolved from the use of cellular phones. It is now not only accepted, but encouraged to “text” instead of speak on the phone with friends, family, or coworkers—let alone speak in person! This new development in social interactions has lead to the degradation of intrapersonal skills in our society. Although those in opposition to such a statement argue that this innovation has lead to the ability to keep in touch with a number of people vastly greater than in the past, the ability to increase one’s networking capacity has come at too large of a price: the aggregate sum of which is, ironically, the influx of awkward interactions between those whom the technology seeks to assist.
Any discussion of awkward interactions and loss of intrapersonal skills must include the modern-craze, Facebook. The online, self-described “social (networking) utility” seeks to allow users to better communicate over time and distance. Original intentions, however, often become perverted throughout time, as is the case with Facebook. What was once a simple way by which college friends could keep in touch has become a favorite pastime of our global culture. Not only does it provide games and questionable privacy issues among “friends,” but Facebook has led to the degradation of intrapersonal skills—even among friends. Obviously, the counter-claim is that Facebook does more good than harm; that it allows friends, colleagues, and family to communicate in a more enjoyable and simple fashion. However, the use of such a powerful tool has become a detriment to human social interaction in the twenty-first century.
In conclusion, the use, not the invention, of powerful innovations such a texting, Facebook, and email is the cause of modern society’s aversion to social interaction. If we are to combat its effects, we must adapt our collective mindset to one which is more curious and open to new and potentially uncomfortable experiences. The outcome of the aforementioned actions would surely be beneficial for the entirety of society.
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With the increased usage of modern technology, our society has experienced a shift in regard to intrapersonal interactions. The time which, in the past, would have been utilized in the presence of friends or family is now occupied with a new set of friends: the computer, the internet, the cell phone, and the television. Although the debate focuses around the necessity of the aforementioned technologies, the true issue is one of modern culture. In our attempt to isolate the “problem” with society, lost is the possibility that these technologies may have evolved from our disdain for uncomfortable experiences, from our uneasiness from meeting new people, and our desire to create a new, better world; however non-real that world may be. If we continue to place blame upon the objects and not the users, we will only exacerbate the issue and will, furthermore, only deceive ourselves of the reality: it is our desire to remove all discommodities from our life.
ReplyDeleteText messaging has evolved from the use of cellular phones. It is now not only accepted, but encouraged to “text” instead of speak on the phone with friends, family, or coworkers—let alone speak in person! This new development in social interactions has lead to the degradation of intrapersonal skills in our society. Although those in opposition to such a statement argue that this innovation has lead to the ability to keep in touch with a number of people vastly greater than in the past, the ability to increase one’s networking capacity has come at too large of a price: the aggregate sum of which is, ironically, the influx of awkward interactions between those whom the technology seeks to assist.
Any discussion of awkward interactions and loss of intrapersonal skills must include the modern-craze, Facebook. The online, self-described “social (networking) utility” seeks to allow users to better communicate over time and distance. Original intentions, however, often become perverted throughout time, as is the case with Facebook. What was once a simple way by which college friends could keep in touch has become a favorite pastime of our global culture. Not only does it provide games and questionable privacy issues among “friends,” but Facebook has led to the degradation of intrapersonal skills—even among friends. Obviously, the counter-claim is that Facebook does more good than harm; that it allows friends, colleagues, and family to communicate in a more enjoyable and simple fashion. However, the use of such a powerful tool has become a detriment to human social interaction in the twenty-first century.
In conclusion, the use, not the invention, of powerful innovations such a texting, Facebook, and email is the cause of modern society’s aversion to social interaction. If we are to combat its effects, we must adapt our collective mindset to one which is more curious and open to new and potentially uncomfortable experiences. The outcome of the aforementioned actions would surely be beneficial for the entirety of society.
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With the increased usage of modern technology, our society has experienced a shift in regard to intrapersonal interactions. The time which, in the past, would have been utilized in the presence of friends or family is now occupied with a new set of friends: the computer, the internet, the cell phone, and the television. Although the debate focuses around the necessity of the aforementioned technologies, the true issue is one of modern culture. In our attempt to isolate the “problem” with society, lost is the possibility that these technologies may have evolved from our disdain for uncomfortable experiences, from our uneasiness from meeting new people, and our desire to create a new, better world; however non-real that world may be. If we continue to place blame upon the objects and not the users, we will only exacerbate the issue and will, furthermore, only deceive ourselves of the reality: it is our desire to remove all discommodities from our life.
ReplyDeleteText messaging has evolved from the use of cellular phones. It is now not only accepted, but encouraged to “text” instead of speak on the phone with friends, family, or coworkers—let alone speak in person! This new development in social interactions has lead to the degradation of intrapersonal skills in our society. Although those in opposition to such a statement argue that this innovation has lead to the ability to keep in touch with a number of people vastly greater than in the past, the ability to increase one’s networking capacity has come at too large of a price: the aggregate sum of which is, ironically, the influx of awkward interactions between those whom the technology seeks to assist.
Any discussion of awkward interactions and loss of intrapersonal skills must include the modern-craze, Facebook. The online, self-described “social (networking) utility” seeks to allow users to better communicate over time and distance. Original intentions, however, often become perverted throughout time, as is the case with Facebook. What was once a simple way by which college friends could keep in touch has become a favorite pastime of our global culture. Not only does it provide games and questionable privacy issues among “friends,” but Facebook has led to the degradation of intrapersonal skills—even among friends. Obviously, the counter-claim is that Facebook does more good than harm; that it allows friends, colleagues, and family to communicate in a more enjoyable and simple fashion. However, the use of such a powerful tool has become a detriment to human social interaction in the twenty-first century.
In conclusion, the use, not the invention, of powerful innovations such a texting, Facebook, and email is the cause of modern society’s aversion to social interaction. If we are to combat its effects, we must adapt our collective mindset to one which is more curious and open to new and potentially uncomfortable experiences. The outcome of the aforementioned actions would surely be beneficial for the entirety of society.
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Recent technological advances have made a significant and lasting impact on modern society. Although some view these advances as detrimental to humanity because they may be decreasing social interactions, there are many positive affects of the technological boom. Technology has. Through new and innovative approaches, technology has improved communication across borders by providing solutions to everyday problems and increasing connectivity.
ReplyDeleteSome argue that technology lacks social interaction necessary to avoid and combat loneliness. However, various technological tools have shown to be effective in providing social support. In recent years online social support networks have become increasingly popular for those diagnosed with or caring for someone with chronic illness. Social support plays an important role in recovering and coping with these illnesses, which can cause feelings of isolation and loneliness for many. Electronic support groups have become a creative and secure alternative for those that may not have access to or are lacking in social networks. In this case, technology is acting as a buffer against loneliness by helping us to overcome everyday obstacles, which otherwise may not have been possible.
A common belief of many is that social networks such as Facebook and Twitter have destroyed they way that we relate to others which has led to weakened relationships. This belief does not recognize the fact that most people do not use these networks to build relationships, but to maintain and enhance them. In this sense, social networks have actually helped us to stay connected and to further build meaningful relationships. Opponents of social networks also argue that these networks lack face-to-face interaction which has led to weakened interpersonal skills. On the contrary, web cameras and programs such as Skype have solved this problem to the delight of many people that travel frequently or are far from family and friends. Instead of detracting from our relationship, technological advances such as social networks, especially those that visually connect us, are adding to our lives by increasing our ability to connect with others.
In conclusion, advances in technology should not be viewed as detrimental to society. Instead, they have provided an outlet for enhanced connections with others that is suitable for our ever changing modern society. We should embrace these advances, as they have helped us to overcome barriers such as distance and lack of time.
@ K-Hack
ReplyDeleteI agree with your argument that we need to find a balance between social networks and interpersonal contact. You provided great evidence that supports this idea of balance and strengthening communication through the use of both interpersonal and technological contact.
Technological improvements including the air conditioner, internet, medical devices, and warfare have changed the lives of the people it affects. Usually these changes are good like creating a peacemaker for the heart or the microwave used for easily made meals. However, technological advances have also created a sense of loneliness for its users.
ReplyDeleteTechnology has allowed people from across states, countries, and oceans to communicate. We are even able to talk to the astronauts in outerspace if need be. These technological advances are great however there is a loss of personal connection in the world today. People might have 5000 facebook friends, but with how many of them would they be able to hold a one on one conversation with?
Psychologists always enforce the importance of human interaction in child development because human interaction provides a template for children to learn social roles and to also reduce loneliness. For example, when a baby is crying at night or afraid a teddy bear is given so that the baby can have some type of physical interaction which is soothing. This also holds true for adults in that when we get lonely we want to be by other people. However, due to the way we use technology it is hard to just be with someone without their phone, pager, or computer telling them there is a new message. Thus the individual is left only with his or her technology instead of people being around.
The internet and social networking sights are suppose to bring people together but they are really just tearing us away. These sites weaken our interpersonal skills and our ability to relate to one another. Also they have caused an addiction. Countless people are not able to go a whole day or hour without logging into facebook and see what everyone else is doing. It is good to know what your friends are doing but it is better to be doing it with them. The pivotal link that is missing in this system is that it puts more emphasis on being on the internet instead of communicating with people in person.
Ironically the co-founder of Myspace says this regarding social networking addictions "I don't think it's a concern at all, I think it's more substitutional. People are spending less time watching television, and they're spending more time on MySpace." So it better to be addicted to the internet than it is television even though both are keeping people away from each other. Television has been known to bring some people together but it also a separator like when a father is paying more attention to the football game than his children. Overall technology keeps people encompassed on it instead of being focused on each other.
http://www.cnn.com/2009/HEALTH/04/23/ep.facebook.addict/
http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2008/06/24/earlyshow/main4205009.shtml
Technological improvements including the air conditioner, internet, medical devices, and warfare have changed the lives of the people it affects. Usually these changes are good like creating a peacemaker for the heart or the microwave used for easily made meals. However, technological advances have also created a sense of loneliness for its users.
ReplyDeleteTechnology has allowed people from across states, countries, and oceans to communicate. We are even able to talk to the astronauts in outerspace if need be. These technological advances are great however there is a loss of personal connection in the world today. People might have 5000 facebook friends, but with how many of them would they be able to hold a one on one conversation with?
Psychologists always enforce the importance of human interaction in child development because human interaction provides a template for children to learn social roles and to also reduce loneliness. For example, when a baby is crying at night or afraid a teddy bear is given so that the baby can have some type of physical interaction which is soothing. This also holds true for adults in that when we get lonely we want to be by other people. However, due to the way we use technology it is hard to just be with someone without their phone, pager, or computer telling them there is a new message. Thus the individual is left only with his or her technology instead of people being around.
The internet and social networking sights are suppose to bring people together but they are really just tearing us away. These sites weaken our interpersonal skills and our ability to relate to one another. Also they have caused an addiction. Countless people are not able to go a whole day or hour without logging into facebook and see what everyone else is doing. It is good to know what your friends are doing but it is better to be doing it with them. The pivotal link that is missing in this system is that it puts more emphasis on being on the internet instead of communicating with people in person.
Ironically the co-founder of Myspace says this regarding social networking addictions "I don't think it's a concern at all, I think it's more substitutional. People are spending less time watching television, and they're spending more time on MySpace." So it better to be addicted to the internet than it is television even though both are keeping people away from each other. Television has been known to bring some people together but it also a separator like when a father is paying more attention to the football game than his children. Overall technology keeps people encompassed on it instead of being focused on each other.
http://www.cnn.com/2009/HEALTH/04/23/ep.facebook.addict/
http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2008/06/24/earlyshow/main4205009.shtml
Recent advances in technological tools have perpetuated the belief that increased loneliness is in direct correlation with the uses to which humanity has put them. Though technology has contributed to the fast-paced world of communication, the ways in which people worldwide have used them can be beneficial, but in some cases, harmful. For instance, recent reports of increased loneliness and depression have risen in Britain, with some reporting tragic cases of suicide. Though suicide, depression, and loneliness are not new concepts amongst social issues, new developments of technology has had a negative impact on interpersonal skills.
ReplyDeleteTechnological tools have increased loneliness by discouraging people to engage in face-to-face interactions. Although these media have improved the speed of communication and are good resources for networking and creating events, they have caused people to go to extremes where communication is solely through these media. In fact, there are online communities where one can create an "avatar" of oneself, and communicate/live amongst other people in the program. Because of the real-world simulation that comes with participating in online communities like this, there is therefore no need for face-to-face interactions. However, what this thought subtly perpetuates is loneliness because of the lack of human contact.
Because of the instant gratification that comes with using certain technological tools, people may abuse these tools until they realize the harmful effects, such as loneliness. Facebook, Twitter, and other instant forms of technology allow people to stay connected to the outside world without actually having to visit the outside world. The danger in this sort of lifestyle is that one may lose all sense of reality and real life communication, causing interpersonal skills to decrease. Once this occurs, the primary form of communication becomes the internet or other technological tools, taking the place of interpersonal communication.
When abused, today's technological tools can cause people to become addicted to solely communicating and interacting with the world through their computer, cell phone, etc. There is so much one can explore and communicate online that technology has created a world of its own. One can buy and sell things via the internet. On birthdays, sending a simple e-Card to your loved ones is an acceptable way to tell someone you haven't forgotten them. However, once people become addicted to these new technologies, they lose the need to go the store, see family and friends, and interact with the outside world. When this occurs, they become at risk for severe cases of loneliness and other social problems.
Although there are many contributing factors to the increase in loneliness, technological tools and the ways in which humans use them has played a major role. Because of the ways in which technology can provide an alternate life of communication and commerce, there exists the danger of allowing technology to replace normal human interactions causing loneliness to increase.
Recent advances in technological tools have perpetuated the belief that increased loneliness is in direct correlation with the uses to which humanity has put them. Though technology has contributed to the fast-paced world of communication, the ways in which people worldwide have used them can be beneficial, but in some cases, harmful. For instance, recent reports of increased loneliness and depression have risen in Britain, with some reporting tragic cases of suicide. Though suicide, depression, and loneliness are not new concepts amongst social issues, new developments of technology has had a negative impact on interpersonal skills.
ReplyDeleteTechnological tools have increased loneliness by discouraging people to engage in face-to-face interactions. Although these media have improved the speed of communication and are good resources for networking and creating events, they have caused people to go to extremes where communication is solely through these media. In fact, there are online communities where one can create an "avatar" of oneself, and communicate/live amongst other people in the program. Because of the real-world simulation that comes with participating in online communities like this, there is therefore no need for face-to-face interactions. However, what this thought subtly perpetuates is loneliness because of the lack of human contact.
Because of the instant gratification that comes with using certain technological tools, people may abuse these tools until they realize the harmful effects, such as loneliness. Facebook, Twitter, and other instant forms of technology allow people to stay connected to the outside world without actually having to visit the outside world. The danger in this sort of lifestyle is that one may lose all sense of reality and real life communication, causing interpersonal skills to decrease. Once this occurs, the primary form of communication becomes the internet or other technological tools, taking the place of interpersonal communication.
When abused, today's technological tools can cause people to become addicted to solely communicating and interacting with the world through their computer, cell phone, etc. There is so much one can explore and communicate online that technology has created a world of its own. One can buy and sell things via the internet. On birthdays, sending a simple e-Card to your loved ones is an acceptable way to tell someone you haven't forgotten them. However, once people become addicted to these new technologies, they lose the need to go the store, see family and friends, and interact with the outside world. When this occurs, they become at risk for severe cases of loneliness and other social problems.
Although there are many contributing factors to the increase in loneliness, technological tools and the ways in which humans use them has played a major role. Because of the ways in which technology can provide an alternate life of communication and commerce, there exists the danger of allowing technology to replace normal human interactions causing loneliness to increase.
Recent advances in technological tools have perpetuated the belief that increased loneliness is in direct correlation with the uses to which humanity has put them. Though technology has contributed to the fast-paced world of communication, the ways in which people worldwide have used them can be beneficial, but in some cases, harmful. For instance, recent reports of increased loneliness and depression have risen in Britain, with some reporting tragic cases of suicide. Though suicide, depression, and loneliness are not new concepts amongst social issues, new developments of technology has had a negative impact on interpersonal skills.
ReplyDeleteTechnological tools have increased loneliness by discouraging people to engage in face-to-face interactions. Although these media have improved the speed of communication and are good resources for networking and creating events, they have caused people to go to extremes where communication is solely through these media. In fact, there are online communities where one can create an "avatar" of oneself, and communicate/live amongst other people in the program. Because of the real-world simulation that comes with participating in online communities like this, there is therefore no need for face-to-face interactions. However, what this thought subtly perpetuates is loneliness because of the lack of human contact.
Because of the instant gratification that comes with using certain technological tools, people may abuse these tools until they realize the harmful effects, such as loneliness. Facebook, Twitter, and other instant forms of technology allow people to stay connected to the outside world without actually having to visit the outside world. The danger in this sort of lifestyle is that one may lose all sense of reality and real life communication, causing interpersonal skills to decrease. Once this occurs, the primary form of communication becomes the internet or other technological tools, taking the place of interpersonal communication.
When abused, today's technological tools can cause people to become addicted to solely communicating and interacting with the world through their computer, cell phone, etc. There is so much one can explore and communicate online that technology has created a world of its own. One can buy and sell things via the internet. On birthdays, sending a simple e-Card to your loved ones is an acceptable way to tell someone you haven't forgotten them. However, once people become addicted to these new technologies, they lose the need to go the store, see family and friends, and interact with the outside world. When this occurs, they become at risk for severe cases of loneliness and other social problems.
Although there are many contributing factors to the increase in loneliness, technological tools and the ways in which humans use them has played a major role. Because of the ways in which technology can provide an alternate life of communication and commerce, there exists the danger of allowing technology to replace normal human interactions causing loneliness to increase.
The technological advances in media such as television, the internet, and video games have become major industries and influences in modern society. While such media have promoted accessibility to obtaining information and as serves as various forms of entertainment, advances in such technologies have declined both social and physical activity. In an era where technological advances allow us the opportunity to connect on various levels, media is instead used to by individuals to replace physical activity, social interactions, and infringes upon social development. In reality, both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them has created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing and antisocial behavior is prominent.
ReplyDeleteMedia use has become one of the main reasons for inactivity in today’s society. Advances in technology have only increased the use of media and declined both the desire and motivation for physical activity. Instead of taking part in physical activity and exercise, many individuals instead opt to play video games, watch television, or spend their time online. Without even realizing it many individuals often spend hours upon hours using such technology and find it hard to walk away. As media is used primarily for entertainment purposes, it has for many become a quick solution for boredom. As such, technology has created both a continuous cycle of use and promoted inactivity.
Technological use has also in many ways replaced social interaction. While one might argue that technology has increased social interactions through social networking sites such as facebook or myspace, it is important to recognize technological use has impeded upon interpersonal relationships. As the emphasis of social networking sites is to expand ones network of friends, many individuals focus on doing just so. Therefore the use no longer becomes about staying in touch with friends, but to expand ones network. While one may have a large network of friends, the lack of social interaction with these individuals may create feelings of loneliness. As they may not really know these individuals and the individuals do not know them, the lack of social interaction only increases this sense of loneliness.
Likewise, the use of technology a social medium impairs ones interpersonal skills and ability to interact face to face with others. Many individuals use technology as their source for “social interaction” and it becomes quite difficult for them to connect with others. Many become obsessed with and hide behind their user names and profiles on websites. This lack of development in interpersonal skills leave many with feelings of isolation and alienation because individuals many not be able to have face to face conversations with others. They find it difficult to connect with others outside of or without the use of games, dual realities programs, and social networking sites. Such dependence on technology for social interaction contributes to antisocial behavior because people do not feel comfortable interacting interpersonally with others.
In conclusion, while technology advances have contributed greatly to accessibly of information and new sources of entertainment, but it has not come without a cost. Dependence on technology and its excessive use has resulted in physical inactivity, lack of social interaction and development. This has intern resulted in increased feelings of loneliness and antisocial behavior in society. In order to decrease such feelings, we must monitor our dependence on technology for social interaction and entertainment.
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The technological advances in media such as television, the internet, and video games have become major industries and influences in modern society. While such media have promoted accessibility to obtaining information and as serves as various forms of entertainment, advances in such technologies have declined both social and physical activity. In an era where technological advances allow us the opportunity to connect on various levels, media is instead used to by individuals to replace physical activity, social interactions, and infringes upon social development. In reality, both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them has created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing and antisocial behavior is prominent.
ReplyDeleteMedia use has become one of the main reasons for inactivity in today’s society. Advances in technology have only increased the use of media and declined both the desire and motivation for physical activity. Instead of taking part in physical activity and exercise, many individuals instead opt to play video games, watch television, or spend their time online. Without even realizing it many individuals often spend hours upon hours using such technology and find it hard to walk away. As media is used primarily for entertainment purposes, it has for many become a quick solution for boredom. As such, technology has created both a continuous cycle of use and promoted inactivity.
Technological use has also in many ways replaced social interaction. While one might argue that technology has increased social interactions through social networking sites such as facebook or myspace, it is important to recognize technological use has impeded upon interpersonal relationships. As the emphasis of social networking sites is to expand ones network of friends, many individuals focus on doing just so. Therefore the use no longer becomes about staying in touch with friends, but to expand ones network. While one may have a large network of friends, the lack of social interaction with these individuals may create feelings of loneliness. As they may not really know these individuals and the individuals do not know them, the lack of social interaction only increases this sense of loneliness.
Likewise, the use of technology a social medium impairs ones interpersonal skills and ability to interact face to face with others. Many individuals use technology as their source for “social interaction” and it becomes quite difficult for them to connect with others. Many become obsessed with and hide behind their user names and profiles on websites. This lack of development in interpersonal skills leave many with feelings of isolation and alienation because individuals many not be able to have face to face conversations with others. They find it difficult to connect with others outside of or without the use of games, dual realities programs, and social networking sites. Such dependence on technology for social interaction contributes to antisocial behavior because people do not feel comfortable interacting interpersonally with others.
In conclusion, while technology advances have contributed greatly to accessibly of information and new sources of entertainment, but it has not come without a cost. Dependence on technology and its excessive use has resulted in physical inactivity, lack of social interaction and development. This has intern resulted in increased feelings of loneliness and antisocial behavior in society. In order to decrease such feelings, we must monitor our dependence on technology for social interaction and entertainment.
word count: 557
The technological advances in media such as television, the internet, and video games have become major industries and influences in modern society. While such media have promoted accessibility to obtaining information and as serves as various forms of entertainment, advances in such technologies have declined both social and physical activity. In an era where technological advances allow us the opportunity to connect on various levels, media is instead used to by individuals to replace physical activity, social interactions, and infringes upon social development. In reality, both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them has created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing and antisocial behavior is prominent.
ReplyDeleteMedia use has become one of the main reasons for inactivity in today’s society. Advances in technology have only increased the use of media and declined both the desire and motivation for physical activity. Instead of taking part in physical activity and exercise, many individuals instead opt to play video games, watch television, or spend their time online. Without even realizing it many individuals often spend hours upon hours using such technology and find it hard to walk away. As media is used primarily for entertainment purposes, it has for many become a quick solution for boredom. As such, technology has created both a continuous cycle of use and promoted inactivity.
Technological use has also in many ways replaced social interaction. While one might argue that technology has increased social interactions through social networking sites such as facebook or myspace, it is important to recognize technological use has impeded upon interpersonal relationships. As the emphasis of social networking sites is to expand ones network of friends, many individuals focus on doing just so. Therefore the use no longer becomes about staying in touch with friends, but to expand ones network. While one may have a large network of friends, the lack of social interaction with these individuals may create feelings of loneliness. As they may not really know these individuals and the individuals do not know them, the lack of social interaction only increases this sense of loneliness.
Likewise, the use of technology a social medium impairs ones interpersonal skills and ability to interact face to face with others. Many individuals use technology as their source for “social interaction” and it becomes quite difficult for them to connect with others. Many become obsessed with and hide behind their user names and profiles on websites. This lack of development in interpersonal skills leave many with feelings of isolation and alienation because individuals many not be able to have face to face conversations with others. They find it difficult to connect with others outside of or without the use of games, dual realities programs, and social networking sites. Such dependence on technology for social interaction contributes to antisocial behavior because people do not feel comfortable interacting interpersonally with others.
In conclusion, while technology advances have contributed greatly to accessibly of information and new sources of entertainment, but it has not come without a cost. Dependence on technology and its excessive use has resulted in physical inactivity, lack of social interaction and development. This has intern resulted in increased feelings of loneliness and antisocial behavior in society. In order to decrease such feelings, we must monitor our dependence on technology for social interaction and entertainment.
word count: 557
The technological advances in media such as television, the internet, and video games have become major industries and influences in modern society. While such media have promoted accessibility to obtaining information and as serves as various forms of entertainment, advances in such technologies have declined both social and physical activity. In an era where technological advances allow us the opportunity to connect on various levels, media is instead used to by individuals to replace physical activity, social interactions, and infringes upon social development. In reality, both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them has created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing and antisocial behavior is prominent.
ReplyDeleteMedia use has become one of the main reasons for inactivity in today’s society. Advances in technology have only increased the use of media and declined both the desire and motivation for physical activity. Instead of taking part in physical activity and exercise, many individuals instead opt to play video games, watch television, or spend their time online. Without even realizing it many individuals often spend hours upon hours using such technology and find it hard to walk away. As media is used primarily for entertainment purposes, it has for many become a quick solution for boredom. As such, technology has created both a continuous cycle of use and promoted inactivity.
Technological use has also in many ways replaced social interaction. While one might argue that technology has increased social interactions through social networking sites such as facebook or myspace, it is important to recognize technological use has impeded upon interpersonal relationships. As the emphasis of social networking sites is to expand ones network of friends, many individuals focus on doing just so. Therefore the use no longer becomes about staying in touch with friends, but to expand ones network. While one may have a large network of friends, the lack of social interaction with these individuals may create feelings of loneliness. As they may not really know these individuals and the individuals do not know them, the lack of social interaction only increases this sense of loneliness.
Likewise, the use of technology a social medium impairs ones interpersonal skills and ability to interact face to face with others. Many individuals use technology as their source for “social interaction” and it becomes quite difficult for them to connect with others. Many become obsessed with and hide behind their user names and profiles on websites. This lack of development in interpersonal skills leave many with feelings of isolation and alienation because individuals many not be able to have face to face conversations with others. They find it difficult to connect with others outside of or without the use of games, dual realities programs, and social networking sites. Such dependence on technology for social interaction contributes to antisocial behavior because people do not feel comfortable interacting interpersonally with others.
In conclusion, while technology advances have contributed greatly to accessibly of information and new sources of entertainment, but it has not come without a cost. Dependence on technology and its excessive use has resulted in physical inactivity, lack of social interaction and development. This has intern resulted in increased feelings of loneliness and antisocial behavior in society. In order to decrease such feelings, we must monitor our dependence on technology for social interaction and entertainment.
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The world has been completely transformed in the past century by technology. Some believe, and rightly so, that this technology and the way people use it has “created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing.” Innovation has great abilities to provide methods of communication but these lack action and reaction of physical interaction, can separate people from their immediate surroundings, and discourage venturing beyond the walls of the home for socializing.
ReplyDeleteEven with “instant” messaging and video chat, conversations often lack the need for immersion in the conversation and thoughtful reaction. While these developments make keeping in touch over distances infinitely easier, there are definitely differences that can cause or abet feelings of loneliness. Video chat allows people to be both heard and seen but can seem to be missing a lot when a conversation with someone after a sad or frustrating day leaves a person unable to give or receive a simple hand or hug of support. This could make both parties feel worse because even though it seemed so close, neither side has closure. Also, texting and chatting don’t require or even suggest the kind of timely response that a face-to-face or telephone conversation requires. It would be extremely rude to carry on 4 independent conversations with people in public and virtually impossible to do on the phone but that’s normal for text and chat. Depending on the pace of the conversation, responding to a text within 5 minutes would be perfectly acceptable but would likely earn a dial tone or cause a fight in other circumstances.
Many parents and teachers alike know the bellicose feeling that can arise when they realize that texting has caused their words falling on deaf ears. Constant tweeting, texting and flipping through Facebook leads to detachment from a person’s physical surroundings in favor of the internet world. In public, not noticing or being noticed by a good friend because someone was checking their PDA or appearing crazy while talking on a Bluetooth have become common occurrences. While this situation may not seem a big deal, it can create an increased sense of being just another face in the crowd. Commercials hail the importance of “Family Game Night” and family dinners often showing frames of children and spouses barely speaking to each other while immersing themselves in television, cell phones, computers and video games. Often these situations isolate one member of the family who may have been looking for a much needed break from working solitude and computer screens but can’t get the interpersonal connection they seek without a battle.
With constant access to everything in the home, there is little motivation to venture out without specific plans or needs. Technology allows people to see, talk to, date, and play games with other people without leaving the comfort of the couch. Or they can choose engage in virtual movement interacting with the digital world. Availability of everything via cyberspace can be deleterious to development of real and relevant social skills. People who present themselves as bold and confident online may be anything but in a typical non-cyber setting. Lack of confidence and comfort can lead to feelings of loneliness and invisibility, if not a longing for it and a return to the cyber world
Technology enables people to do so much in the 21st century by connecting people all over the world be they old friends or new acquaintances. People can see, hear, and interact with others at any time and anywhere there’s internet access. But all these interactions lack a more physical interaction- regardless of whether people actually touch. Psychological studies with primates have shown that they prefer the comfort of a blanket- warm, soft and inviting to that of cold wire and the offer of food. As our closest genetic relatives, perhaps there is a similar connection between loneliness and lack of a similar physical interaction.
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The technological advances in media such as television, the internet, and video games have become major industries and influences in modern society. While such media have promoted accessibility to obtaining information and as serves as various forms of entertainment, advances in such technologies have declined both social and physical activity. In an era where technological advances allow us the opportunity to connect on various levels, media is instead used to by individuals to replace physical activity, social interactions, and infringes upon social development. In reality, both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them has created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing and antisocial behavior is prominent.
ReplyDeleteMedia use has become one of the main reasons for inactivity in today’s society. Advances in technology have only increased the use of media and declined both the desire and motivation for physical activity. Instead of taking part in physical activity and exercise, many individuals instead opt to play video games, watch television, or spend their time online. Without even realizing it many individuals often spend hours upon hours using such technology and find it hard to walk away. As media is used primarily for entertainment purposes, it has for many become a quick solution for boredom. As such, technology has created both a continuous cycle of use and promoted inactivity.
Technological use has also in many ways replaced social interaction. While one might argue that technology has increased social interactions through social networking sites such as facebook or myspace, it is important to recognize technological use has impeded upon interpersonal relationships. As the emphasis of social networking sites is to expand ones network of friends, many individuals focus on doing just so. Therefore the use no longer becomes about staying in touch with friends, but to expand ones network. While one may have a large network of friends, the lack of social interaction with these individuals may create feelings of loneliness. As they may not really know these individuals and the individuals do not know them, the lack of social interaction only increases this sense of loneliness.
Likewise, the use of technology a social medium impairs ones interpersonal skills and ability to interact face to face with others. Many individuals use technology as their source for “social interaction” and it becomes quite difficult for them to connect with others. Many become obsessed with and hide behind their user names and profiles on websites. This lack of development in interpersonal skills leave many with feelings of isolation and alienation because individuals many not be able to have face to face conversations with others. They find it difficult to connect with others outside of or without the use of games, dual realities programs, and social networking sites. Such dependence on technology for social interaction contributes to antisocial behavior because people do not feel comfortable interacting interpersonally with others.
In conclusion, while technology advances have contributed greatly to accessibly of information and new sources of entertainment, but it has not come without a cost. Dependence on technology and its excessive use has resulted in physical inactivity, lack of social interaction and development. This has intern resulted in increased feelings of loneliness and antisocial behavior in society. In order to decrease such feelings, we must monitor our dependence on technology for social interaction and entertainment.
word count: 557
The world has been completely transformed in the past century by technology. Some believe, and rightly so, that this technology and the way people use it has “created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing.” Innovation has great abilities to provide methods of communication but these lack action and reaction of physical interaction, can separate people from their immediate surroundings, and discourage venturing beyond the walls of the home for socializing.
ReplyDeleteEven with “instant” messaging and video chat, conversations often lack the need for immersion in the conversation and thoughtful reaction. While these developments make keeping in touch over distances infinitely easier, there are definitely differences that can cause or abet feelings of loneliness. Video chat allows people to be both heard and seen but can seem to be missing a lot when a conversation with someone after a sad or frustrating day leaves a person unable to give or receive a simple hand or hug of support. This could make both parties feel worse because even though it seemed so close, neither side has closure. Also, texting and chatting don’t require or even suggest the kind of timely response that a face-to-face or telephone conversation requires. It would be extremely rude to carry on 4 independent conversations with people in public and virtually impossible to do on the phone but that’s normal for text and chat. Depending on the pace of the conversation, responding to a text within 5 minutes would be perfectly acceptable but would likely earn a dial tone or cause a fight in other circumstances.
Many parents and teachers alike know the bellicose feeling that can arise when they realize that texting has caused their words falling on deaf ears. Constant tweeting, texting and flipping through Facebook leads to detachment from a person’s physical surroundings in favor of the internet world. In public, not noticing or being noticed by a good friend because someone was checking their PDA or appearing crazy while talking on a Bluetooth have become common occurrences. While this situation may not seem a big deal, it can create an increased sense of being just another face in the crowd. Commercials hail the importance of “Family Game Night” and family dinners often showing frames of children and spouses barely speaking to each other while immersing themselves in television, cell phones, computers and video games. Often these situations isolate one member of the family who may have been looking for a much needed break from working solitude and computer screens but can’t get the interpersonal connection they seek without a battle.
With the increased usage of modern technology, our society has experienced a shift in regard to intrapersonal interactions. The time which, in the past, would have been utilized in the presence of friends or family is now occupied with a new set of friends: the computer, the internet, the cell phone, and the television. Although the debate focuses around the necessity of the aforementioned technologies, the true issue is one of modern culture. In our attempt to isolate the “problem” with society, lost is the possibility that these technologies may have evolved from our disdain for uncomfortable experiences, from our uneasiness from meeting new people, and our desire to create a new, better world; however non-real that world may be. If we continue to place blame upon the objects and not the users, we will only exacerbate the issue and will, furthermore, only deceive ourselves of the reality: it is our desire to remove all discommodities from our life.
ReplyDeleteText messaging has evolved from the use of cellular phones. It is now not only accepted, but encouraged to “text” instead of speak on the phone with friends, family, or coworkers—let alone speak in person! This new development in social interactions has lead to the degradation of intrapersonal skills in our society. Although those in opposition to such a statement argue that this innovation has lead to the ability to keep in touch with a number of people vastly greater than in the past, the ability to increase one’s networking capacity has come at too large of a price: the aggregate sum of which is, ironically, the influx of awkward interactions between those whom the technology seeks to assist.
Any discussion of awkward interactions and loss of intrapersonal skills must include the modern-craze, Facebook. The online, self-described “social (networking) utility” seeks to allow users to better communicate over time and distance. Original intentions, however, often become perverted throughout time, as is the case with Facebook. What was once a simple way by which college friends could keep in touch has become a favorite pastime of our global culture. Not only does it provide games and questionable privacy issues among “friends,” but Facebook has led to the degradation of intrapersonal skills—even among friends. Obviously, the counter-claim is that Facebook does more good than harm; that it allows friends, colleagues, and family to communicate in a more enjoyable and simple fashion. However, the use of such a powerful tool has become a detriment to human social interaction in the twenty-first century.
In conclusion, the use, not the invention, of powerful innovations such a texting, Facebook, and email is the cause of modern society’s aversion to social interaction. If we are to combat its effects, we must adapt our collective mindset to one which is more curious and open to new and potentially uncomfortable experiences. The outcome of the aforementioned actions would surely be beneficial for the entirety of society.
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@Yael
ReplyDeleteI like the points you raise but your first two are very similar. You give good reasons in both paragraphs but they follow along the same line. Trying to find a more distinct supporting point- or at least separating the two.
@Ariel,
ReplyDeleteI like the organization of the essay and the examples that you make. It is true that today people are turning more to cellphone messages and facebook for comfort. But I wonder, are they doing so because they refuse to seek out real physical contact or is it because they are in a situation where physical contact is impossible such as late at night when there friends might be sleeping?
In today’s society, technology has become an essential tool in ones daily functioning. In modern society the advances made and the use of technology have aided in not only decreasing loneliness but have created vast opportunities for networking, personal discovery and socializing that otherwise would not have existed amongst these individuals.
ReplyDeleteWhile the article Loneliness and Technology, points out that the use of email and cell phones have decreased the amount of in person contact, it can also be argued that the use of cell phones and email allow for quick communication. We live in a society where individuals say “time is money” and none to spare. Especially as Americans we are constantly on the go and always looking for simplified solutions to do more in a day. The use of smart phones, iPod touch and other devices allow for this increased communication.
While it can be irritating to have individuals constantly checking their phone or running to their laptops, it could however be for very important reasons. For instance with the creation of webcams and the use of Skype, individuals are able to connect and see family members on the other side of the world. Like a father who is on active duty, can still attend his daughter’s birthday party.
Additionally, individuals have found ways to use technology to help erase the loneliness and isolation they are faced with. Many have been successful at finding a mate or making new friends thanks to online dating sites and support groups. The ability to reach someone at any time actually increases your ability to socialize and stay connected, when one would otherwise be alone.
Some would argue that increases in technology have isolated individuals and impeded their socialization and in person contact with other human beings. This may be true for some who chose to hide behind their computer screen yet is not true for all. Technology has sparked interest in more education, discussion and interaction for many individuals. The ability to communicate with someone three thousand miles away or have a video conference from your home has allowed individuals to become innovators and entrepreneurs. In no way has technology stunted the growth of social interaction and communication nevertheless enhancing it as well as enhancing relationships. The advances in technology and the human designated uses for it have created modern societies that work to diminish loneliness and increase socialization, networking and personal discovery.
It is undeniable the technological boom that has taken place since the mid nineties. “Dot com” businesses and services have taken off and have made millions, allowing people to connect to the world around them in completely new ways. These connections have only been fortified as social networking sites and online gaming institutions that continue to gain popularity. Sites like “Facebook“ and “Twitter” effortlessly gain millions of new users each year and time spent playing video games over the internet has been on a steady increase for the past three years. However, while it can also be said that these connections are bringing people together, they also appear to be pushing people to becoming more and more lonely and secluded.
ReplyDeleteIt is estimated that over four hundred million people spend more than eight million hours on Facebook each month. These are hours spent communicating with friends and family, and yet not actually interacting with them. Instead, millions are sitting alone at a computer screens, not building, or strengthening, face-to-face personal relationships. Moreover, even the most intimate of interpersonal interactions have gone cyber. Dating sites generate millions of dollars from millions of users, where people can meet from all corners of the globe. For many, dating has become relegated to emails and personal messages. Additionally, there are tens of millions more spending comparable amounts of time playing video games online. Averaged out at four hundred and sixteen hours per user annually, people are becoming more and more secluded as time spent online also increases annually. On the one side of the issue, many argue that while these millions are participating alone in their activities, they are able to connect with people through them. After all, each user is simply one amongst millions. Contradictorily, often these interactions are purely superficial, just typed words from one person to another with no interpersonal interaction taking place. As evidence, one simply has to look at those who have become so addicted to these virtual realities that deaths have resulted.
Video game addiction has become a serious issue, with doctors pushing for it to being recognized by the American Medical Association. News sources have reported people of all ages having locked themselves away for days at a time, dying from exhaustion and malnutrition. The medium of gaming itself has become an addiction, as others have committed murder due to their games being destroyed or confiscated.
In closing, to say that our lives have become completely wired is seemingly an understatement. Almost every segment of existence can be done alone, over the internet, be it work, shopping, dating, religious observance or life itself. People are spending numerous hours in self-imposed exile for hours if not days on end, and the number of hours doing so is on the rise each year. Social networks may be shrinking the world and bringing their users together, but it is unfortunate that those users are often sitting alone.
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In today’s age, it is an impossibility to deny that technology is playing an ever-increasing role in our daily’s lives. Some have argued that this increase use of technology, and the means in which it is being implied, has led to an increase in the feelings of loneliness among its users. However, this viewpoint is fallible and overlooks the benefits and the increased connectivity that technology has created around the world. As a direct result of the advances in technology, our world has become more interconnected, collaborations have been forged in every field, and our ability to stay in touch with friends and families has been increased.
ReplyDeleteTo say that the increase use of technology is the culprit of decreased human interaction ignores the truth that often it is through technology that we keep in touch with those close to us. As our workweek has grown longer, and our commutes longer in this tough economy, free time to for face-to-face interaction with distant friends and relatives is a luxury. However, through the use of technology, it is possible to keep in contact with these people on a daily basis compared to monthly when only mail was available as a speedy mode of communication. This allows for more information to be communicated, which in turns leads to greater enrichment of our lives. In addition, the ability to keep in contact with distant friends allows us a more varied social experience and further enrichment. If not for technology, our amount of communication, and the number of those we communicate with would decrease.
While some may assume that technology allows for the isolation of oneself from the world, It has in fact allowed for everyone to become globally connected. This ability has resulted in numerous collaborations that would have otherwise been impossible, such as the establishment of North Korea’s first laboratory to address anti-biotic resistant strains of tuberculosis that was started by a group in America. Furthermore, the world cup stands as a testament to the benefits that technology offers, as the whole world rejoices or grieves at the progression of their favorite teams, as they play on a continent that needs the world’s attention. These interactions have given us the ability to connect to those of different cultures and viewpoints, which challenges our ideas, opinions, and beliefs. This culture offers our lives further enrichment, that wouldn’t be possible in a world that wasn’t so interconnected with technology.
While some problems have arisen from the increased amount of technology in our lives, the overall benefit has allowed us to become more social, interconnected, and globally aware. All of which has resulted in increased enrichment of our lives, and in turn lessen our loneliness.
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@Jones
ReplyDeleteI really liked your use of the example of the father on active duty be able to still attend their daughters birthday party, this argument drives home how much times have changed, and the opportunities that technology now offers.
@ Brenna:
ReplyDeleteYour essay was well put together. Specifically, your discussion of the current lack of "face-time" and its effect on our society was particularly powerful to your argument. I, also, wonder how this modern development will change our society in the future.
Today many people would argue that the development of new technologies and the implementation of those new tools create a world in which loneliness is an ever-increasing phenomenon. It is true that the these new tools such as Facebook and texting do in fact create a world in which loneliness is more prominent, but they do not necessarily cut people off from the world. The creation of new lines of communication and interaction have accelerated the means with which individuals can interact with each other, while at the same time altering the nature of those interactions. Relationships and friendships are no longer measure solely on the time by which people physically spend around each other and speak with one another about their lives.
ReplyDeleteThe usage of telephones and communication has been completely altered by the invention and mass usage of texting. Although useful in certain situations, the nature of conversations using phones is no longer the same as it was before the invention of texting. When conversing, humans use a number of tools including intonation and semantics to convey certain messages with their words. But with the arrival of texting, the ability to include such tools as sarcasm and intonation are made obsolete as the technology eliminates the ability to do so.
Facebook is another tool that has revolutionized the way in which individuals meet other people and begin relationships. The act of declaring someone a “friend” on Facebook has completely changed the concept, as it is applicable to real life situation. While this concept may seem very straightforward in the sense that “friends” on Facebook do not equate with friends in the real world, some individuals fail to see the misconnection. While the technology has revolutionized the definition of friendships and relationships, Facebook has also changes the way by which people do interact with their friends. Now individuals can see what their friends have been doing via their photos on Facebook instead of sitting down with them and talking about such events.
The development of technology that revolutionizes our world and the way in which we communicate with each other will continue to evolve as we proceed into the future. While it is true that the inventions of such tool as Facebook and texting have created a world in which loneliness is much more predominate, there is still hope. The arrival of Skype is an example in which technology has the ability to reverse the negative effects that texting and Facebook have had on the way in which individuals communicate with each other in the future.
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Technology is not to blame for loneliness in our society. Though some may argue that it has replaced human-to-human contact, it is clear that technology has done more to help communication rather than harm it. If we, as a society, continue to blame technology for the epidemic of loneliness we are experiencing, not only will we stop the progression of technology, we will also avoid the real issues that are the roots of our loneliness. Technology can aid us in our quest for connection to others and relieve society of the loneliness it feels, but only if it is used correctly.
ReplyDeleteSociety’s use of technology only brings people closer together and gives them the ability to stay connected with people from across the world. With the advances of the Internet and social technology, people are able to keep updated with friends and family whom they may have never been able to without this technology. Even the invention of the telephone and with the emergence of texting has allowed people to be in constant contact with each other. It is obvious that the feeling of loneliness that has been cites by many members of society does not stem from their inability to contact others. If one has a computer or a phone, they have an endless amount of connections to the world.
There is more data that proves the Internet and technology has improved the lives of most rather than caused them to feel loneliness. You can find a support group, chatroom, or social networking site for almost anything you can imagine. People who were considered outcasts only twenty-five years ago have now found a place where they can relate and communicate with others who share their interests. The Internet has connected millions of people whom otherwise would have been lonely without technology. It is unfair to present data without previous studies about the state of loneliness in society without technology. They are making a claim against technology, when it could have actually improved the feeling of loneliness among many in society.
For many people, technology has saved their relationships and has found them a connection to the outside world. It has been able to bridge the gap between continents and even generations. The world has grown smaller because of the progression in communication technology. There will always be a means for people to isolate themselves from the outside world, but it is their choice to do so. If people use technology for good, they will never have to know what it is like to not have a friend because with the Internet, our list of friends could be endless.
@ Ricardo
ReplyDeleteI like your structure and use of language. You have a clear thesis and clear topic sentences. I would improve your essay by mentioning your examples in your first paragraph. It would prepare the reader for the evidence you will use to back up the claim in your thesis. Ii is great how you bring in an additional point in your conclusion paragraph, which adds hope and ends it on a good note.
Over the past quarter century, the development of high speed Internet technology has marked the progress of human development. Where some have argued that technology draws individuals apart as a result of increased isolation, others assert that technological development has broadened human interaction by building extensive social networks and increasing response times between individuals. Although technology can build barriers by isolating individuals, it can also maintain deeply intimate relationships. It is nevertheless up to the individual in society to maintain a broad social network while preserving intimate friendships in the process. Loosing sight of individual choice assumes that technology accounts for increased isolation, when in reality individuals isolate themselves through technology.
ReplyDeleteConsumption of technology is a reflection of personality. Extraverted individuals are more likely to maintain many “Internet-based” relationships with old friends through instant messaging and social networking sites, while introverts are more likely to spend their time reading the news, or blogs. The accessibility of the Internet makes it easy for individuals to pursue their interests in accord with their natural personality type. Thus, while technology has been blamed for “loneliness”, inevitably individuals choose to be lonely through the activities they pursue on the Internet. Individuals self-select between whether not they want to join an Internet chat room, or online forum, or shoot monsters in some online underworld. Technology has become a mechanism for individuals to exhibit personality in the very way they select content and gather information.
Although individual use of technology is ultimately an individual choice, even the most reluctant individuals are forced to interact. Most gaming systems are now connected to the Internet where users must communicate with one another to plan strategy and tactics, most cell phones come with text-messaging plans, and recently Apple revealed a program on it’s new iPhone with video-chat capabilities. Unless individuals are only using the Internet to gather news, it would be difficult to completely ignore the open-source, open-communicative nature of the Internet. Individuals who make a choice to completely isolate themselves would have likely made that choice without the Internet.
Technology is a mechanism for individuals to choose and select information and lifestyles. The Internet specifically has grown to bring more individuals together through video chatting, instant messaging, online forums, blogs, and email. Technological consumption is but a vehicle for interaction, and in the past quarter-century the nature of interaction itself has changed. Despite the rapid changes in how humans communicate however, technology is just another mechanism to exhibit personality. It also serves to bring individuals together. The choice on how to use technology ultimately rests with the individual, and that has been a consistent choice throughout human developmental history.
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@ Little Leeah: Do you really think that 30 years ago, that old lady wouldn't have still been laying there for two years decomposing? Maybe she was just a "cats-only" kinda woman. I'm just saying that if people are naturally introverted maybe that's how they'd be, regardless of technology.
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ReplyDeleteOur world is increasingly a place of technological innovation. From cell phones to social networking sites, technology has become an integral part of the average person’s daily life. Some argue that this is problematic because the development and use of such technology increases loneliness in users. Instead one could argue that technology is a blessing rather than a curse because of it saves time, money, and relationships.
ReplyDeleteCurrent technology can be viewed as a great asset to modern day society because of its efficiency. With such technology, one could write a message on a socially networking site to a friend instead of spending an hour writing them a letter and shipping it off. Another example of the positive influence of technology can be seen in process of text messaging as a message can be sent both with discrete and alacrity. For example, if a woman is at a party and her best friend finds out that her ex-boyfriend is on the way, then she could send her a text message without anyone being suspicious and in plenty of time to avoid an awkward situation. A phone call on the other hand, would be difficult to hear in such a setting.
Technology also saves money along with time. The price it would take to send a letter over seas could very well be much higher than making a phone call. One must also take into account that the call would reach the person instantly while the letter would take some time. And when one takes into account social networking sites like “Face book” one could easily send the same message written in a letter as a “Face book” message for free and instantaneously.
Along with saving money, technology can also save relationship themselves. Because of technological innovations, it is now easier than ever to keep in contact with people. One could use a phone rather than an antiquated pen and paper in order to hear the voices of their loved ones. In addition, innovations like video chat have made it possible to have virtual face to face conversations despite distance. As a result, people are able to sustain and build on relationships like never before. One might speculate then that people may be tempted to see loved ones less, but this is not a generalization that can be made. Technology leaves that decision up to each individual person, and the fact that it provides the option of not “breaking the bank” to see loved ones repeatedly.
In the end, the development and use of technology does not increase loneliness because it saves time, money, and relationships. In a world of increasing technological innovation, one should be looking foreword to the next advancement instead of condemning technology for problems inherent to humanity. And as time progresses one can only expect for technology to help in making relationships closer.
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@ Paul: I like your argument that it is a personal decision to be lonely. But couldn't one argue that without technology, they would have to be extroverted to a certain degree in order to navigate their way through society?
ReplyDelete@ Ricky: I thought it was extremely interesting that you brought up the issues of intonation and semantics. You point out that texting does away with both but is that a good or bad thing? And why?
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